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Life as a princess
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Life as a princess |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Life for me People help do things that I cannot do I use a wheelchair instead of my legs I use a walker to hold me up instead of myself I use a head rest to help me hold my head up I use a seat belt so I don't fall out of my wheelchair I use a chest strap so I can sit up better My mom lifts me into the van so I can get around places where I'd like to goeveryone in my family helps me I have a special neads dog who helps me incase I need her she is my best friend I take medication to help my body I don't like them but I have to take them I know they help me One day I will be in GODS arms with my dad who died of cancer they'll great me to HEAVEN But until then I'll learn how to deal with life complete my dreams love everyone in my life  Minna |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey, this is great, very well written.  Bel |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Min.....you're my hero. ~Carly "The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake." - Leonardo da Vinci |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Outstanding. This is such a powerful poem. The style of it, just straight-forward no nonsense facts, information, makes it have a great impact. Very very well done. The unique style of the poem is what makes me say that. You did good. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, this was a very powerful piece. It was also kind of personal. Your words are very true. Keep your head up. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Never say 'I Love You' unless you mean it" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
NIcely done here Minna! You are a strong woman!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Min, you should be considered one of the wonders of the world!! Keep your head up my doll...and give Lucy hugs for me. ~*~Jessica~*~"Tell me why you cry" |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I don't even know you but you are strong, I loved your poem, like everyone else said..they all took the words right out of my mouth, and you are a princess in your own right, most ppl would be down on themselves but you have such a beatiful spirit and outlook =) I simply loved it!! brought tears to my eyes because it was so straight forward =) Tmd, Kristen "Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night" ~Crash and Burn~ |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Minna, I am so proud of you!!! I'll talk to you later. Love always me. ohhh got to put this into my library. Minna, wonderfully done indeed. The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Minna...I'm so proud of you I go to school with a girl in a wheelchair, she has spinabifida (or however you spell it), and she's constantly (in my opininon) trying to get people to feel sorry for her...Minna, I know nothing about your background, but you are a wonderful person, I hope all is well in your future www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorneri dont know if i should cry because its over, or smile because |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Minna, you just showed me your inner strength. And I envy you for I'm not even half your strength. Hope I had your will in life. "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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