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Alone, alone at last...
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Alone, alone at last... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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‘Follow me, reader. Who told you that true, eternal love does not exits?’ Mikhail Bulgakov, from Master and Margarita “Alone, alone at last!” And happy, they, once more, embraced and softly cast two shadows to the floor. He recognized her scent and mildly, with care, his eager, anxious hand extended to her hair. Her eyes appeared to plead, “Tonight I’m yours, my dear!” In his, she seemed to read, “I won’t let go, I’m here...” She whispered, “Don’t let go... I beg you hold me tight!” And later, neighbors saw two silhouettes in flight. Check out my poetry here: http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master [This message has been edited by Master (edited 03-03-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here master!! Once again you've managed to capture the reader and pull him into a world of imagination!! Great poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Way cool. I liked the poem cept for the first stanza.. the theme was very romantic, another nice piece here. JR When my life dims to a perish, it will become a quote in itself... |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Niiiiiice one. Me liked berry much....... ~Carly "The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake." - Leonardo da Vinci |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Now that was really good you always seem to amaze me evrytime you post loving it keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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