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Angel Bee
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since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

0 posted 2001-03-03 09:19 PM

I'll Be Here

I will be here for no matter how far away you are
L ove is what I will feel for you no matter what
L isten to you is what I'll do when you need a open ear
B e where you are, when you need me most
E xtend a helping hand is what I'll do when you fall
H elp your heart heal when it is broken
E xcellent job is what I'll tell you when you do something great
R each out to hug you when you feel nobody loves you
E very day and every night know that I'll be here

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

1 posted 2001-03-03 10:33 PM

awww this is soooo cute!! i hope that whoever you wrote this with in mind gets to read it and appreciates it because it's nice to know that someone will always be there for you no matter what.

Valerie

*Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes*

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-03-04 12:15 PM

what a wonderful acrostic poem. you did a really good job. keep writing, seems like you are really good at it.

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-03-04 12:54 PM

Nice acrostic.....sweet.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Angel Bee
Member

since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

4 posted 2001-04-21 04:34 PM

thanks

*~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~*

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-04-22 02:08 AM

Acrostics are great and so much fun! Try one that rhymes too, they are a lot of fun to do.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-04-23 09:03 PM

Nice acrostic! I like this a lot.
Thanks for the read.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

7 posted 2001-04-23 10:57 PM

like every1 said "nice acrostic"
hehe...yea i liked how u wrote the poem..
and keep writing

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

8 posted 2001-04-24 09:41 AM

Aww... This acrostic was really sweet. Keep it up.

*~*Amanda*~*

*If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!*

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