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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
So easy it is to be a butterfly To fly away and never to return I wish I could do the same Be carefree and make the world more pretty But it seems as if I can't I will try, but until then I will admire the butterfly for it truly makes everything more bueatiful |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very lovely piece! Ah, if only to be a butterfly....even for just a day. It would be nice, wouldn't it? Wonderful work, keep it up!  *Krista Knutson* "Can't run fast enough Can't hide I can't fly I'm struggling with the limits of this ordinary life..." ~Tracy Chapman |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
I'd love to be a butterfly too but i'd be one just so i can spy on people LOL a certain special someone in my life in particular HAHAHA  great job. i think we all can relate!~*Valerie*~ *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes the butterfly is beautiful....but please everybody do not confuse it for a moth! It'd completely contradict this poem and then we'd all be like "angelbee, what a liar!" haha..... anyhow, this poem was great. It reaked of truth.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
And what of a moth? Just a butterfly who can fold its wings down, not back, and has frillier antennae. Every bit as beautiful. And a wonderful piece, Angelbee. It would be nice to have such freedom... ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
yes, a butterfly is beautiful and so is everyone, even you  beautiful poem angelbee thanks for the share "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. [This message has been edited by acire (edited 03-04-2001).] |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
This is an awesome poem...there is a lot of emotion lying just under the surface...this is a great write...keep up the good work! "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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