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Angel Bee
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since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

0 posted 2001-03-03 09:03 PM

One there was a guy in an orange shirt
Once there was a girl in her new khaki skirt
The two talked and after a while
They fell in love with each others smile

And then there was a casual dance
They wanted to be together at first glance
So dance is what they did
Being together is what they bid

Then these two went out one night
And now saw each other in a different light
Now they guy and the girl are together
And thats how it'll be now, and forever

Angel in Flight
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since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

1 posted 2001-03-03 09:13 PM

This poem made me say AWWWWWWWWWWWW. Great piece!!! It made me jump for joy at the ending

Into the library you must go. Love ~ Amanda Destiny~

The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

2 posted 2001-03-03 10:01 PM

It's so simple, and that's what makes it so wonderful! nothing elaborate, back to basics! I love it

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-03-04 12:42 PM

Sweet poem.........it's a nice story.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-03-04 03:03 AM

This is such a sweet poem.
I love the story behind it. Very positive.
And I think you put it together very well.
This is going into my library.

It would do me good to look back on this in a few months or so again.
Great job, Angelbee.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-03-04 02:15 PM

I love the way you narrated you poem
what a beautiful story and ending
loving it

thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

[This message has been edited by acire (edited 03-04-2001).]

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-03-05 04:14 PM

This was such a cute lil story/poem!!! Aww i liked it a lot!!

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

7 posted 2001-03-06 10:01 AM

how romantic, what a superb poem!!!

JR

When my life dims to a perish, it will become a quote in itself...

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