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Dear Dad |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
I'm going to fight this battle for you I don't care no one is stopping me I also went to go see SAVE THE LAST DANCE I saw how the girl faught past her fears So I'm going to fight my fears like racing in skiing It scares me to see you in dreams Someday's I cry I want you back in my life I don't know what to do sometimes But people help me talking about it I just want you back in my life I miss you so much I don't understand why cancer killed you There's never a day that passes me by that I don't think of you Your in my heart, you come into my dreams then you leave I scream I wish I could call heaven talk to you for a while But I can't I'm still fighting my disability, life everything Only the future holds everything thanks for everything that you taught me I love you dearly Love,  Minna RIP Mikko Talviharju 2-21-42 to 12-23-99 |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Someone very close to me recently lost his mother to cancer...I've seen the pain it can cause. I'm extremely sorry for your loss and at the same time I'm glad to see you writing out your pain. It's wonderful therapy. Hugs to you. *Krista Knutson* "Can't run fast enough Can't hide I can't fly I'm struggling with the limits of this ordinary life..." ~Tracy Chapman |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Quite sad here.......it's nice to see you venting out your sadness in poetry and not on yourself. Good job and I hope to read more.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Yes, this was quite sad. But you have a somewhat positive tone about it. I'm glad you are dealing with this so well. Poetry is a great way to commemorate those that we love. Keep smiling. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
It's not easy without a dad. But somehow I'm manging, by poetry and talking to people. Minna You can hide, You can be crul, You can't be my friend. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It's good to see that you still do talk to him though he is now up above. He listens you know....I totally believe in that. Hope you do realize that he'll always be with you Minna. Thanks for the share "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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