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jytree
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0 posted 2001-03-02 11:08 AM


moved to the moderators forum for review.


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shortilove_03
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1 posted 2001-03-02 12:13 PM


Wow,
I really liked this poem. This is how you feel about breaking up. HOpe you feel better.

Shelia

jytree
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2 posted 2001-03-02 09:10 PM


I write like my friend at time everything is ok but sometimes this happens

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel



QtPi239EK
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since 2001-02-22
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3 posted 2001-03-02 10:09 PM


aww this was really great!!!
Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2001-03-03 12:52 PM


I liked this a lot. nicely done here jytree



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Greeneyes617
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5 posted 2001-03-03 01:06 AM


Hey Jay!!! You did a pretty good job of expressing your problem. I liked it. You know YOU can call me ANY time. Thats what friends are for.
jytree
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6 posted 2001-03-03 07:42 PM


thanks dopey I was getting stuck with writter's block and I just let my stress out in a poem and greeneyes I will call you if I can works is getting busyer


Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel



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