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Allysa
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0 posted 2001-03-01 03:39 PM



I don't want to say goodbye yet,
there's so much I have to say.
But if I say goodbye now,
I'll still be with you every day.
I'll still be there when the sun shines,
and when the sky is gray,
because I have touched you,
and I'll never go away.
I don't want to say goodbye yet,
there's so much I need to do.
But the thing I need to say most is,
that I'm in love with you.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.


© Copyright 2001 Allysa - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-03-01 04:19 PM


Very nice. Brings back some memories of one particual ex-g/f.
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2 posted 2001-03-01 04:39 PM


aww this was really cute. memories great job oooh and i replied to a couple of your really old poems from Teen Poetry#2..just thought id let you know

*dq


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3 posted 2001-03-01 04:43 PM


This was a really sweet poem. Good job.
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4 posted 2001-03-01 04:54 PM


Nice job on this poem, I like it    Oh, and your signature messege thing is cool

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I thought that this was really good... I found a person who i could fit it to and I could because it was vague and left the reader to pick and image of who they wanted it to be...
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6 posted 2001-03-01 05:40 PM


This is good. I'm sorry you have to say good bye... but sometimes that's life, and it sucks. Good luck!

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7 posted 2001-03-01 06:13 PM


Oh Allysa
hope things do get better for you
beautiful poem


"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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8 posted 2001-03-01 06:57 PM


it sucks to say goodbye...just gotta deal with it very carefully and not say anything you'll regret... nice poem, very good!

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9 posted 2001-03-01 11:22 PM


Allysa~
Sometimes its hard to say good bye but sometimes its for the best. Great work on this poem. Keep it up girl!!!


People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

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10 posted 2001-03-02 04:35 AM


Allysa:

Quite an impressive and emotional poem. I liked it a lot. I hope that things manage to turn out right.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

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11 posted 2001-03-02 08:16 AM


Thank you everyone!! Erin, long time no see!!!!!! I've missed you!!

(ain't my signature nifty?)

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.


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Now that definitely is a nice signature Asylla

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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thank you (takes bow, hugs anyone in sight, including Acire, and smiles. Then sits back down at computer and thinks, and becomes serious again) It's been a long day.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.


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14 posted 2001-03-02 06:06 PM


when are you gonna get your aim or icq?

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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15 posted 2001-03-02 06:26 PM


Was the quote made by someone who could be credited or is the author unknown? Curious minds need to know!

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16 posted 2001-03-02 08:29 PM


this is wicked good. i absolutely love it. am puttin it in my library
great job

love
Valerie

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17 posted 2001-03-03 12:39 PM


Awwwwww the ending is so sweet. Well I hope all works out well for you allysa!!



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I admire it daily

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18 posted 2001-03-05 08:30 AM


alright, thanks everyone, esp. Dopey, haven't talked to you for a while.
Acire, I don't know if I'm going to get AIM or ICQ, because I was gonna get AIM, to talk to Justin, but he cancled his account and all, so I don't know.
Lakewalker, I have no idea who came up with that. I saw it on a screen saver at my school, so I just copied it onto my math book and put it as my signature.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.


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19 posted 2001-03-07 06:25 PM


so you can get it tto talk to evryone else in pip then

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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20 posted 2001-03-07 06:31 PM


I don't know why I haven't seen this one before! But I love it! Thanks ! into the library!

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

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21 posted 2001-03-07 06:44 PM


I've been there. I don't want to say goodbye to my ex b/f who i still love oh so very much but i know i have to. very good poem!
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22 posted 2001-03-07 06:55 PM


Thank you I really like it and brings me joy to know beautiful poems like this are still upheld.

I see the darkness coming all is bleak…

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23 posted 2001-03-08 08:30 AM


thanks everyone. acire, tell me more about aim, and icq

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.

Life is what happens when you're making ot

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24 posted 2001-03-08 10:54 AM


its better to get icq, cause most of the members of pip has icq. It's the first one actually that came out with a messenger. Like yahoo's or Aim's. It'll show you who amongst your friends in pip that you've added to your buddy list is online or not. Sometimes the members of the forum go into a chatroom and just chat away. You might benefit in getting it

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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25 posted 2001-03-13 03:51 PM


okay, question, what in the world is icq? Explain please!

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.

Life is what happens when you're making ot

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26 posted 2001-03-13 07:19 PM


It's a program in which you can talk to people real time. In chats, messages, voice, send files, and so on.

go to
www.icq.com

It's a wonderful prog.

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27 posted 2001-03-13 07:28 PM


Yeah, but more people have AIM and it's the better program.
MSN is the best one, I think. But not a lot of people here have it...
Well my advice is get AIM.
http://aim.aol.com/aimnew/Aim/register.adp?promo=106723&pageset=Aim&client=no

try this link. AIM is much better.
But it doesn't hurt to get both.

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort


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28 posted 2001-03-13 08:13 PM


My advice is to get icq for the purpose of talking to more PIP members and moderators. This is what PIP uses.

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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29 posted 2001-03-14 09:30 AM


AIM or AOHell is in NO WAY better than ICQ. Every time I use AOHell I get the Blue Screen of Death and have to restart my computer! Allysa get ICQ, it's the best! And this way you can talk to me too!
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30 posted 2001-03-14 02:00 PM


A-hole-hell?
huh?

ICQ rocks



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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I admire it daily

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31 posted 2001-03-14 02:38 PM


Also, you can download a program called odigo which combines your buddy lists from ICQ, AOL and yahoo and basically allows you to run the three messengers in one nifty program. It's available at www.odigo.com -- There's also another program out there that combines ICQ, AOL, Yahoo and MSN but it runs off of linux which is an OS that most people do not run. Hope this helps.

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32 posted 2001-03-14 03:32 PM


Okay, im confused. Does any of this cost anything or what not?

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.

Life is what happens when you're making ot

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33 posted 2001-03-14 04:42 PM


Listen.....don't get Odigo.....I heard from a friend it just crashes yer comp all the time.
It's easy to get ICQ.....all of us COOL PEOPLE at passions have it.

oh....and no, none of these programs cost anything.....



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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34 posted 2001-03-14 09:26 PM


This is all freeware Allysa
FREE


"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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35 posted 2001-03-14 11:15 PM


I've been using odigo since it came out and haven't had any problems with it . . ..

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"You don't love her because she's beautiful. She's beautiful because you love

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36 posted 2001-03-14 11:32 PM


Hey mods! Move this to the Alley!

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort


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naaaaa.....it's a poem. We're just branching off, it doesn't need to be moved to the Alley.

Anyhow, Odigo sucks according to a friend, but I'm sure having a working, non-crashable version would be quite useful.
ICQ rocks though..so...ummm....yea


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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38 posted 2001-03-15 11:54 AM


Like they said it's all free...but from my personal experience AOHell instant messenger is not great! ICQ is better...of course, it's your choice Allysa.
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39 posted 2001-03-15 12:08 PM


Well, if the purpose of getting one is to talk to other Passions members, you need to get ICQ. You see that flower on each reply, those are the people that have icq

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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40 posted 2001-03-16 06:02 AM


WOW! Simple in form and in words but it has great meaning behind it. And a very complex subject as well. I loved it. Very uplifting in it's own way. Keep posting.

>¶Øʆ<

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41 posted 2001-03-16 10:05 AM


What are you talking about, Tony?
Oh yeah, the poem.
There's a poem too, isn't there?

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort


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42 posted 2001-03-16 06:00 PM


Haha yea, there's a poem.

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43 posted 2001-03-16 06:03 PM


And it was a sweet poem!
Allysa is lucky she didn't check the "email notification" box, isn't she?
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort


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44 posted 2001-03-16 06:09 PM


Quite lucky........if I did I would have been so annoyed I woulda sent Allan, Dopey, and Acire to hell by now haha


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45 posted 2001-03-16 07:04 PM


Oh, there's a poem

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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46 posted 2001-03-16 10:29 PM


Hey,

Great poem, hope to see more like it IT was so good I loved it keep it up until your next poem

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47 posted 2001-03-20 08:18 AM


I have to say this is the most replies I've ever gotten to a poem. Just because MOST (not all, but most) have NOTHING what so EVER to do with the poem, doesn't mean anything. I never check the "email notification" box, incase something like this were to happen. Does anyone remember the tp and snowball fight from Teen 3???

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.

Life is what happens when you're making ot

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48 posted 2001-03-20 08:23 AM


Alright, I'm probably gonna get ICQ, seeing as if I don't, ACIRE might just annoy me untill I do. BUT, I'm gonna wait until I get my new comp. because I am.
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49 posted 2001-03-20 09:31 PM


annoy?

that's not a nice thing to say

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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50 posted 2001-03-21 08:17 AM


I sorry Acire! But you know it's true!!!!! I'm sorry!!!!!! Ya know I love ya!!!!! I've come up with my own theory. I'm normal and the rest of the world is weird. Hehehehe.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.

Life is what happens when you're making ot

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51 posted 2001-03-28 05:55 PM


OK, I won't bug ya anymore

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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52 posted 2001-03-28 06:31 PM


woohoo I'm post 52!!!

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

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53 posted 2001-03-28 07:21 PM


Yeah!  High-five, C&B!  *slaps C&B a high-five*
Wow... #52.  
wait a minute....

I'm #53!  In your face, man!  

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind.  For I can only see out of my own.  ~~Carly Van Dort


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54 posted 2001-03-28 07:24 PM


54...thats all i need to say..
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55 posted 2001-03-28 08:28 PM


Wow.. this is a sad case.  Everyone here has too much time on there hands..

YESSSSS #55!!!!

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

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56 posted 2001-03-28 09:10 PM


sorry for deviating so much from the topics original ideals but plz everyone hear me out I wanted to post a topic asking all teen poets to come in and post once...even if it's just a hi in order to see how many of us are really here and actually take the time to read stuff...maybe everyone will write their own original little thought, anything. Does anyone second my idea and would be willing to post on it?

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

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57 posted 2001-03-28 09:12 PM


Throw a poem in and it will stay up.  Just mention in the poem, not in the title, that it's your intent.  Otherwise, we'll not get an accurate # in response.  
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somehow, I think all this has nothing what so ever to do with my ever so lovely poem.  But, I DON'T CARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (I've got one thing and one thing only to say, and if anyone wants to stop me, go ahead!!!!!!!!) WATER FIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (throws water balloons at everyone in sight)  (funny, how water balloons seem to come out of nowhere)  I know I'm a bad girl, but hey, what can I say, I want summer to come soooooooooooo bad! I hate Ohio weather.  But ya know what they say, if you dislike the weather in Ohio today, wait a few days, it gets better.  Anyways, that's all I have to say!!!!! (repeated once again: WATER FIGHT!!!!)  

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.

Life is what happens when you're making ot

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59 posted 2001-03-29 03:58 PM


In Michigan it's wait five minutes and the weather will be better.  *chucks a balloon at every moving target*

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60 posted 2001-03-29 05:48 PM


*takes out a firefighter hose and connect's it to a really BIG WATER GUN* Allright kidies playtimes over, eat this *click gun on and fire's in circular motion for 1 minute* Hey where did everybody go?

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

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61 posted 2001-03-29 07:38 PM


What's going on in here?

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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62 posted 2001-03-29 10:33 PM


You are all very strange, and about that water fight: Count me in!!!!!!!
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  ohhh yeah Lakey, gotta love the Mi stuff! *chucks balloons at every breathing thing in range* CHILD OF THE STARS WILL REIGN SUPREME!!!!! MWUAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!

Many miles behind my eyelashes, there always seems to be
the strangest things, the slightly sane, that only I can see...

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64 posted 2001-03-30 03:47 PM


Whatever you all! Ya all shall perish. Who wants to be on my side? I proclaim myself a team captain. I think we should have teams, that way it'll be funnnnn!!!!!!!! Uh, I want Dopey, Acire, Lakewalker, Allan, C&B, and Child of the Stars for now. Anyone else wanna be on my team? Anyone else wanna be a team captain too???

(whips out water gun and sprays everyone insight!!!!!!!!! Hahahahaha!!! Bow down to me!!!!!!!!!! Hahahahaha! ~water gun is attached to huge semitruck filled with water~ Hahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

Come on gang, we gotta go to Toys R Us to load up on supplies like Bubbles.  Then onto Walmart, so we can get some chocolate pudding. I've got a plan!

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to.  I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

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65 posted 2001-03-31 03:19 PM


Nice job on this poem.  It's very well written... as for Allan and acire... just tell them to shut up!   Good job

--Marie

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What did I do to deserve that  

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So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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67 posted 2001-03-31 03:29 PM


*comes back from Wal Mart with a full supply of bubbles and chocolate all over his face*
They were... uhh...   all out of pudding.  Sorry.  

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68 posted 2001-04-01 08:55 PM


........ ..........I leave and this hell breaks loose......alright c'mon c'mon! break it up!!!  


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Acire, you didn't do anything. I don't know what that's about.

Allan, don't worry about the chocolate pudding, I've got loads.  It happens to be one of few things I can cook.

Dopey, see what ya miss? All hell does break loose!! We're all little devils inside!!!!!!

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70 posted 2001-04-02 11:02 PM


*ties you all up to chairs*
chill out everybody!!!!
We are not animals......we are civilized human beings.....erm....*thinks*....YEA!!
SO ........do what I say and .....CHILL!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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I admire it daily

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71 posted 2001-04-02 11:05 PM


*I now will use a firehouse on all of you, now who wants to be on my team?? HEHE!!

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72 posted 2001-04-03 12:12 PM


~*Picks up Allysa and uses her as a shield*~

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So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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73 posted 2001-04-03 12:55 PM


*picks up Acire and uses him and Allysa as an even better shield*
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Okay, so I'm now a human shield. Whatever you say.  Come on Allan, I've got a secret plan.

illf het estr fo het alloonsb ithw hocolatec uddingp nda etsl og etg het therso!!!

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to.  I never thought that I couldn't.
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75 posted 2001-04-03 12:13 PM


I thought we were going to eat the pudding?  Oh well.  *sits down and grabs a can of coke*

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your a bad girl Allysa, bad girl

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*stares the fire hose down trying to intimidate it*


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Lakewalker, if you want, I'll make u pudding. (and thanks for listening to me)

acire, i'm not evil, i'm just well acquainted with the dark side.

Dopey: BONZI!!!!!! ~* hits dopey with first chocolate pudding filled balloon *~

Sorry Dopey, I couldn't resist.

~* picks up chocolate pudding filled balloons and chucks them at everyone in sight*~

Every person for themself~

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79 posted 2001-04-04 11:26 AM


Is this your evil plan to get everyone distracted while licking all the pudding off themselves so you can slam us with the power of the firehose?  I will not fall for your plan.  MMMMmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.....chocolate!

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That was not my plan, but it'll work.  Wanna help me??? You can be on my side!!! Me and you versus all these weird punks. (no offense everyone) What do you say?

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to.  I never thought that I couldn't.
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*walks off while wiping all the chocolate off his head*
Stupid chocolate balloon thingy in the air....arrrgggg!!!!
*slams the door in a rage.....*
*clanging noises ceom from afar*
*opens door and comes back with a rapid fire chocolate covered cherry launcher*

ratatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatata!!!!!!!!

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Who's a punk  

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Yeah let's team up,  
*slams her with a bowl of chocolate pudding*  
Not!  
*walks away, laughing.  Hears beeping noises, turns around, and sees a dump truck of pudding about to unload on him*
Oh well, it was fun while it lasted.  Anyone for pudding wrestling?  Oh wait, I see Dopey's got some cokes over there.  I'll just go over and see what's going on.......

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84 posted 2001-04-04 11:46 PM


Great poem it's the first poem I've read on here in months and it brings back the memories.Keep up the great work.
  Lauren

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Acire, you're not a punk, you're a soft cuddly teddy bear.  I'm a devil!!!!!!!!! Lakey, I thought I could trust you.  I guess not.

~* Drives up in father's dump truck with dump truck full of chocolate pudding. (funny, I can't drive) *~

~* Parks dump truck and lets the pudding flow. *~  

I tried to make an agreement with yas, but it's every person for themself now!!!!!!!!!!!

BONZI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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86 posted 2001-04-05 09:04 AM


~*Starts throwing thosebrown stuff at Allysa, hitting her almost all the time in the face.  Wait a minute, why does this thing I'm picking up on the ground smell like ....*~

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So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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don't really feel like fighting right now, kinda sad.  bad day.  on monday night, this girl at my school, a friend of mine, slit her wrists and she's in some psych hospital for a few days or something. well, c ya all later.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to.  I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

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88 posted 2001-04-05 04:26 PM


*hugs Allysa*

*welcome lake to his coke corner*
hey pal.....just chillin here watchin them all fight....Allysa is sad here....I'm tryin to cheer her up  

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89 posted 2001-04-05 04:28 PM


Hey there IM BACK lol great poem luv keep writting plz....i'd love to read  more.

"i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw"



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90 posted 2001-04-05 04:32 PM


Allysa, have a coke, sit down, relax.  We can watch all of our slaves, er, uh, the teen poets having their pudding fight (pudding fight?  is that a first here at passions?).  Oh, Branden, nice of you to stop in!

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91 posted 2001-04-05 04:38 PM


LoL i think it is but ill never forget the yellow snowball fight rofl that was great hey nice poem here.
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92 posted 2001-04-05 07:29 PM


oh yea but don't forget how I brought in the brown snowball....now THAT was entertainment.


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I leave the thread for one day or so..... and the level of class just plummets... figures...

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~*hugs Allysa*~

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So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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95 posted 2001-04-05 09:13 PM


Who is winning, thats what i would really like to know?
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Well, me of course!
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97 posted 2001-04-06 01:27 PM


*Approaches Dopey, bows to the all-powerful Dopey Dope*
Please have mercy on us, great one.
*opens jacket and shows Dopey the cocolate covered tnt strapped to his chest*
Take that!

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98 posted 2001-04-06 05:05 PM


one word LOLz ....hehe yea! also nice poem u wrote i liked it  

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99 posted 2001-04-07 03:04 AM


*cuts the blue wire to disarm the tnt*
Idiot....I am a explosives expert.....Mwhahaha!!!!
*whaps hiney boy and walks off*

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100 posted 2001-04-07 03:50 AM


hehehe NUMBER 100!!!  
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101 posted 2001-04-07 11:28 AM


*shows jury the huge handprint on his face*
Yes, this is wear Dopey Dope hit me, and it will be there for life.  I'd like his guitar and his post count here at passions.  This beast must learn that it's not acceptable to beat people  

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102 posted 2001-04-07 02:05 PM


Sheesh... somebody's doing a lot of suing these days...  

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103 posted 2001-04-07 02:36 PM


You can't have my guitar!!!!  
That's like asking for my soul!
*gives hiney boy a burrito*
there....all is mended now with a peace offering.  


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I wouldn't eat a burrito.  especially from you.  and i'm not hiney boy.  take back calling me hiney boy and give me some pizza, and we have a deal.  

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105 posted 2001-04-07 03:45 PM


i actually like burito can you give me some also do i like cake pplz give me cake i want cake. cake! cake! cake! ... ohh yea and don't forget 2 hook up the pizza with the order  
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106 posted 2001-04-07 03:49 PM


Lake, you got a deal!
*takes back calling hiney boy the hiney boy and orders some pizza for him*

oh and albert....the cake is in teen explorer....

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107 posted 2001-04-07 03:55 PM


It was.  

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108 posted 2001-04-07 04:15 PM


But you just called me hiney boy again!  Oh well.......I guess there are worse things to be called *looks at hiney*  And it is that bad after all

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109 posted 2001-04-07 04:19 PM


*peeks at lake's hiney* I wouldn't know.....I never look at it  

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Su~re you don't.  

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You don't know how happy I am that none of you have actually looked at my hiney in person.

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112 posted 2001-04-07 04:33 PM


coz maybe its not a good sight?  
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I just have a thing against men staring at my bum for too long, that's all.  

*looks back again*
It's not too bad down there, really  

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114 posted 2001-04-07 08:57 PM


What's going on in here now?

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So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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115 posted 2001-04-07 08:59 PM


Uh-oh..... old Fluffy is checking up on us again....  

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116 posted 2001-04-07 11:57 PM


to me, this just seems like a good way for everyone to get more "POSTS", am i right or am i wrong?
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That's what the Alley is for, einstein.     
This is us just keeping a post at the top for no apparent reason.  Get your facts straight!

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118 posted 2001-04-08 01:27 AM


Great poem, it's almost the opposite of the one I just posted. Hopefull you can read this reply since its all the way on page 5!

"It is better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all" ~Unknown

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About getting more posts?! Who would, in their right mind, post just to get a post?!
This is all about interaction, sharing, having fun, meeting new people, and then making fun of them!
haha....it's all about Mr. Big Mama Diva.

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120 posted 2001-04-08 12:33 PM


I think it's fun to come and.....be made fun of? ......Ok, maybe it's not fun.  But it's something to do.  Right?

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121 posted 2001-04-08 12:56 PM


You said it, Big Mama.  
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Dang straight Big Mama! You tell 'em!

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Thanks Cheech and Ringo.

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124 posted 2001-04-08 08:46 PM


I can see cleary now..u are all nuts!!!!!!!!! hehe
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*Like a flight attendant*
Welcome to Page 6

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126 posted 2001-04-09 05:33 AM


cheech and ringo! hi ya'll doin?
wait...where are u guys ohh i c its page 6
sooo hi ya'll doin?.....

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127 posted 2001-04-09 08:22 AM


If you just want to get more posts, than use a single post for every word.

Like

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to.  I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

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this.

anyways, hiney boy, how ya doin?

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to.  I never thought that I couldn't.
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What's going on with you now Allysa?

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So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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If we're nuts, I want to be the cashew, 'cause they taste the best.  

*pretending he didn't here Allysa's comment*

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131 posted 2001-04-09 03:51 PM


What the heck is going on here???? Sheeesh!! Ok, I just briefly looked at how this possibly got to the 6th page of replies...(not that it's a bad poem or anything..) and I saw some talk of behinds and men staring at other men. I'm so very disturbed by all of this.  
This is craziness!!!
P.s Who's fluffy??

Jenn

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132 posted 2001-04-09 04:11 PM


Acire is fluffy.

NOTE TO SELF: Live to love and love to live.

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hahahaha  
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ohh yea! hiney boyeee and cheech and ringo can't we all jus get along?  

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Thanks Carly  

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136 posted 2001-04-09 07:21 PM


Does anybody know the record number of posts for one topic??
Let me know!!
Jeff

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*tap dances*
tap tap tatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatap!


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138 posted 2001-04-09 09:18 PM


That'd probably be the Geography Game in the Alley, Jeff.     that thing is huge!
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How huge are we talking here Alan???
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??????/ CAn i post a POEM that my GirlFriend wrote me??????
I would really like to........
just let me know if its ok!!
THanks
Jeff

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141 posted 2001-04-09 11:11 PM


Why on earth would you ask this in this thread, Jeff?     There's a Q&A forum in addition to this one.  Haven't you ever been outside of Teen #4?
Well I'll tell you right now it's not much of a pain to register her... so just register a username for her and let everyone know who she is.     Then you'll be well within guidelines.  

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142 posted 2001-04-09 11:29 PM


You guys are going nuts on this thread.  What does Allysa have to say about it?

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143 posted 2001-04-10 08:08 AM


Oh I have loads and loads to say about all of this.  ONe, in order for you all to carry on you're weird, abnormal way of posting notes in here, ya all must check out my poem "Another Girl" and please, stop talking about hineyboy's hiney. But reallly ya all, you guys crack me up.  Let's see if we can out do the highest number post thingy. Think ya all can do that?   because I'm not sure..........

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to.  I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

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144 posted 2001-04-10 05:35 PM


I highly doubt that Allysa

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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145 posted 2001-04-10 10:34 PM


Well, lets give it a try!!!!!
Back to the top this one goes,
dont ask me why I am putting this one back at the top, considering no one goes in here to read your poem, which was great,
oh well...
we will see how it goes..
See all you nuts later
Jeff

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146 posted 2001-04-10 10:44 PM


I don't know what to say...

"Eat, drink and be merry for tomorrow you die."

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147 posted 2001-04-10 10:46 PM


"Mr IsGona, where have you been?"

ummmm....

*feels the stares burning his flesh"
    
ummm....

"well?"

ummm...
ummmm....
ahhh... good poem  Allysa

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148 posted 2001-04-10 10:47 PM


Oh yeah, Allan you can use my poem for your signature if you want. Remember to include my name! (Aaron)

"Eat, drink and be merry for tomorrow you die."

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149 posted 2001-04-10 10:48 PM


I wonder how many pages we can get...

"Eat, drink and be merry for tomorrow you die."

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150 posted 2001-04-10 10:50 PM


YES!!! I have post 150!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Eat, drink and be merry for tomorrow you die."

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151 posted 2001-04-10 10:51 PM


PLUS NOW ITS ON PAGE 7!!!!!

"Eat, drink and be merry for tomorrow you die."

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152 posted 2001-04-10 10:55 PM


Great poem Allysa. Im not sure if I mentioned this earlier but it made me feel all good inside.

"Eat, drink and be merry for tomorrow you die."

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153 posted 2001-04-10 10:56 PM


YOU ARE THE MAN, LOW MAN'S LYRIC!!!!!!  
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154 posted 2001-04-10 11:05 PM


WOW, this is nuts, ALan, you are nuts to, where is everyone tonight??
=)

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155 posted 2001-04-11 08:23 AM


WE'RE ALL NUTS!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Acire, I can do anything once I put my mind to it, so can you my friend!!!!!!!!! I got Justin (aka: my ex) to tell me that he cared about me, which is almost as impossible as me finding out his middle name, but I did it!!!!!!!!!!! ANd with all you guys helping me, we can surely out do the highest post number thingy.  What is that number???

Alan, thanks for being crazy, someone needs to keep the fun around here.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to.  I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

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156 posted 2001-04-11 04:42 PM


Allysa...

We're all crazy!  haha.. this thread has turned into quite a convo!  STOP THE MADNESS!

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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157 posted 2001-04-11 04:46 PM


The geography game post has 588 posts right now and grows by a lot each day.  Right now I'm thinking that the chances are slim of this getting higher, unless Dopey stays around and dances more.

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.  
Ever tried the Teen Explorer Forum?

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158 posted 2001-04-11 07:52 PM


*dances a lot more*
la la la la la la
*does a flip and lands on his index finger*
*dances more*

*falls*
erm.......

*gets up and dances more*

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159 posted 2001-04-11 08:02 PM


LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
There is no way this can catch the Geography Game..but who says we cant try

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I have a new signature!! Does anyone like it? I found it on the net somewhere and the writer that wrote it is anonymous, I wonder who wrote this?

Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend."  
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161 posted 2001-04-11 08:47 PM


No way geography game can be outdone

and Allysa, good for you

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So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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162 posted 2001-04-11 10:47 PM


Every time I see the title of this poem it makes me laugh.  
Think about it, it's almost like the thread begs you to come back...
Well, no need to say "goodbye" to this thread yet...

Concieted??  Impossible!  That would be a fault!

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163 posted 2001-04-11 10:51 PM


Ya, true people just love to send this one back to the top, where then everyone else and their mothers has to write some reply..which is funny in its own little special way.

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164 posted 2001-04-11 10:52 PM


like this

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165 posted 2001-04-11 11:15 PM


I bet you Allysa is loving it

I guess you hold the record in teen now  

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So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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i wanna hold the record!
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167 posted 2001-04-12 04:27 AM


this is so cool!
~kate

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168 posted 2001-04-12 06:56 AM


'I don't want to say goodbye yet'

Isn't it ironic?
don't you think?


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169 posted 2001-04-12 08:18 AM


Acire, you're right, I'm loving all of this.  It's awesome to have the awesomest thread in the world (or atleast all of teen) but I still think we could possibly outdo the geography thread.  I think we can do anything that we put our  minds to.   Last night I was talking to Justin and I had a pillow over my head and I told him that I had a pillow over my head and he asked me if I was trying to suffocate myself and I said no and then I said but what if I was? And he said "then I'd hafta come over there and stop you." ANd I said "no you can't."  And he said "Why not?"  And I said "My hair looks like crap."  And he laughed.  ANyways, Dopey, you can never catch up to me!!!!!!!!!!!! But you can dance some more.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to.  I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

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170 posted 2001-04-12 01:50 PM


AWWWWWW this poem was so sweet and sad!!! great job here hun
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Thanks Shugar, join in the fun!!!!!!!!!!!!! (We call all laugh at Dopey when he dances) LOL!!!! (This is just for the heck of it) ~* Chucks chocolate pudding filled balloon at Allan and hides behind Acire*~ (Now who's a human shield?)

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to.  I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

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172 posted 2001-04-12 05:41 PM


~*let's out a big fart at Allysa*~  

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So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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173 posted 2001-04-12 05:44 PM


*dances out of the room due to some nasty fart let out of acire ugly hiney*
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174 posted 2001-04-12 06:54 PM


I like to say salsa.

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175 posted 2001-04-12 06:56 PM


(\___/)
(='.'=)
(")-(")

,-._,-.
\/)"(\/
(_o_)

Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend."  
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176 posted 2001-04-12 06:58 PM


*swallows the balloon*  mm yummay!  
Oh and Javier... want to compete?  Well do you remember THIS one?   /pip/Forum45/HTML/000847.html

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Hmm odd those pics didn't come out too well. Ill try again. HEY I STARTED PAGE 8!!!!!
(\__/)
(='.'=)
(")-(")

,-._,-.
\/)"(\/
(_o_)

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178 posted 2001-04-12 07:02 PM


I been having writers block lately. Hopefully it passes so I can post more poems for you all to read and for Allan to critisize lol.

Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend."  
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179 posted 2001-04-12 07:40 PM


Well... if you can't beat em... join em....
How is everyone today??
I'm good thanks.    

Jenn

"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia



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180 posted 2001-04-12 07:56 PM


Allan.....shhhhhh....i don't want that one up and about again.....
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*pukes*
is that normal?

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back to top...........page one
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Bumb! lol.

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184 posted 2001-04-14 07:21 PM


Ok now, this is gettng a little rediculous.  At least try to talk about something guys.

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So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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185 posted 2001-04-14 08:23 PM


Let's talk about Acire's new icon.  Won't Mr McCoy be angry?     And I so loved Fuzzy!  Well here's the icon that I think Acire should have... the one in this reply.  
Everyone post with an icon you think Acire should use.  
~Allan

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I think acire should have this icon.

Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend."  
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^
^
^

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188 posted 2001-04-15 08:59 AM


Hey.. I want my own icon.. grrr  

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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189 posted 2001-04-15 09:50 AM


^
|
this Icon has acires name all over it.  Of none of know acires REAL name so I guess that I was makeing an assumption... lol

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^^^^^   This is my vote  

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191 posted 2001-04-15 05:28 PM


Haha.. Nice, Lake..  Okay, how many of you are scared of this icon ^^^^
Attack of IT!
Scarrrry.....

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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192 posted 2001-04-15 06:08 PM


*Screams like a Bansheeeee*
It's the icon of THE MIKE SACKS!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dep mods n' mods....yeah doesn't it freak you out too???? I almost hit something there!!!
Yep acire, this icon's for you.

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193 posted 2001-04-16 03:34 AM


Carly that icon is perfect.....it smiles like a doughnut.....haha....just......like.......acire.......Mwhahaha!!!!
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This was truly a great poem and it's going on my post-it board.
*S*staci

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very funny guys  

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So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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196 posted 2001-04-23 08:24 AM


I leave for ten days and suddenly everyone is picking on Acire?  How fair is that?
Can I help?

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to.  I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

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