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sinfully_seductive Junior Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 31 |
when i gaze upon the beauty portrayed in my mind i see more than what's actually there kindness and love make this being beheld deep within my imagination could it be? this omniscient creature lives within just an arm-length if only i could reach my outstretched arm to feel the beauty enclosed by its mortal shell how could such a divine and loving soul be bestowed upon this wicked earth where all its glory shan't be recognized in all the evil this heathen world hath made to keep you protected shall be, i hope, my job forever i promise you to be the center of my universe or until my defiant universe will cease to exist |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Interesting poem... I'd like to go into some sort of analysis but... You truly have lost me. "For Her" makes clear that the poem is not about Christ. Perhaps some sort of diety from another religion? I hope to see an explanation. This has sparked my interest.. ~Allan Welcome to Planet Earth, where the angels tread on the land. ~~Allan, to Amanda. The sunshine hears you not. Speak to the shadows he creates. |
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sinfully_seductive Junior Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 31 |
no this isn't about christ, i'm not religious. i wrote this in my "lovestruck" phase. it is indeed for a very special her. so nope not religion, but love. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. I liked it a lot. very well done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You must really like this person i do like some of the old english you decided to add on the poem it does give it it's own personality  great write, keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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