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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
I haven't been posting for a while due to personal issues. I'm posting alot of my old stuff now because I know none of my recent works would be allowed here. Anyways I hope you enjoy this one.. "Bird" I know you can hear me But are you listening I know you have eyes to see But do you care that I'm glistening Do you think I want to die? Is that for you to decide? Or do I just want a shoulder so I can cry Is there no one for me to confide? What do you care if I die You won't even notice unless I learn to fly And if I manage to capture flight Even then will I be clouded from your sight? Look at me You're trapped now and I know you can see I will be heard I'm no longer a caged bird >¶Øʆ< |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey there Tony, this was great the first time around and even better the second. I really liked it, thanks for posting. Smile k? ~Carly "Nature is not only all that is visible to the eye--it also includes the inner pictures of the soul." ~Edvard Munch |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Very imaginative thoughts POA. You have a lot of talent in you, there's no doubt about that. keep sharing and welcome back "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Very well done, nice to have you back. And well done rhyming "Listening!" I'd never have done so.  See you around. ~Allan Welcome to Planet Earth, where the angels tread on the land. ~~Allan, to Amanda. The sunshine hears you not. Speak to the shadows he creates. |
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DreadedLiver Member
since 2001-01-23
Posts 56Alter, Ego |
hah! marvelous.... i loved it... specially: "And if I manage to capture flight Even then will I be clouded from your sight?" nice return post! JR "zzzIzzzAMzzzJEREMYDRAULzzz" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was ok. It's nowhere as near as good as most of your work, yet the message itself was quite nice.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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