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Marshalzu
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0 posted 02-27-2001 04:38 PM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

The Guy

Heís a pretender to the throne
a usurper, a fool
he thinks we do not notice
but were just playing it cool
heís a slippery, slimy guy
and we all hate his guts
we wish that he would die
because he is driving us all nuts
his horrible laugh, his greasy hair
he thinks he knows it all
when he sits down in that chair
he drives us up the wall
he walks with a limp
but its just for show
he ainít no pimp
and he just wonít go.

Hey thanks for listening...
Marshal Zu.
© Copyright 2001 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-27-2001 07:53 PM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allan Riverwood

Excellent poem. The fact that you didn't give him a name made the reader search for someone to fit the description. I know ~I~ found someone.
It is so generalized and flexible... I'm adding it to my library so I can look at it a few months down the road and see if someone else comes to mind.
Either way, very original!
~Allan

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The sunshine hears you not. Speak to the shadows he creates.
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2 posted 02-27-2001 07:54 PM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allan Riverwood

sorry.... forgot to hit the button.
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3 posted 02-27-2001 09:54 PM       View Profile for DancinQueen   Email DancinQueen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DancinQueen

yeah what allan said

*dq


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4 posted 02-28-2001 05:14 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Hey! *I'M* not that bad!!!!!!

No but great poem here.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily
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5 posted 02-28-2001 06:34 PM       View Profile for cutie2005   Email cutie2005   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cutie2005

This was a great poem, and me myself found sumone to fit it!! I'm sure anyone can, it was awsome!! Great job!!
Luv ya,
cutie


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6 posted 02-28-2001 07:32 PM       View Profile for Lakewalker   Email Lakewalker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lakewalker

I liked this one, it was really good. Keep posting

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7 posted 02-28-2001 11:38 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

"he walks with a limp
but its just for show
he ainít no pimp
and he just wonít go."

lol LMAO
im sorry if im laughing..its not bout your poem
it's something personal about a friend
great write....liking it a lot
keep sharing


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So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.
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8 posted 05-27-2001 05:02 PM       View Profile for stace_co2003   Email stace_co2003   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit stace_co2003's Home Page   View IP for stace_co2003

interesting...really...

but I'd sure like to know who was in your mind when you wrote this!!  
anyway, I hope you don't mind, I'm going thru all of your poems, just to see what all you've written..  
*s*
Stace

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i liked this poem greatly...awesome job and hope to see more...marsha! ...?

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swimming in fairy floss.......


10 posted 05-27-2001 07:58 PM       View Profile for cherish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherish

thanks for listening?????????????.....
NO!!..
THANK-YOU FOR SHARING!!!
agpfagp...no?..YES!
ill look out for this guy next time im out and about and punch him for you..

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it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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Ooo..everyone can find a person to fit a description like this. This person sounds like a real gimp. Hit him with a pie.  

~AF~

Know what you want. Become your real self.
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12 posted 05-28-2001 11:32 AM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

I hated this person when I wrote this piece but now I kinda like him and he's one of my friends... I guess you just need to give people a chance... and not him them with pie  
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13 posted 05-28-2001 12:00 PM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

i ditto what allan said...i think its rather fun to rack my brains to think of someone who will fit your description
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14 posted 02-05-2003 07:15 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

I thought this was hilarious!

You can sit there and forgive someone until the cows come home, and it won't make a bit of difference until they forgive themselves.

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