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The Guy. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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The Guy He’s a pretender to the throne a usurper, a fool he thinks we do not notice but were just playing it cool he’s a slippery, slimy guy and we all hate his guts we wish that he would die because he is driving us all nuts his horrible laugh, his greasy hair he thinks he knows it all when he sits down in that chair he drives us up the wall he walks with a limp but its just for show he ain’t no pimp and he just won’t go. Hey thanks for listening... Marshal Zu. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Excellent poem. The fact that you didn't give him a name made the reader search for someone to fit the description. I know ~I~ found someone.  It is so generalized and flexible... I'm adding it to my library so I can look at it a few months down the road and see if someone else comes to mind. Either way, very original! ~Allan Welcome to Planet Earth, where the angels tread on the land. ~~Allan, to Amanda. The sunshine hears you not. Speak to the shadows he creates. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
sorry.... forgot to hit the button. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
yeah what allan said  *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey! *I'M* not that bad!!!!!! No but great poem here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
This was a great poem, and me myself found sumone to fit it!! I'm sure anyone can, it was awsome!! Great job!! Luv ya, cutie If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I liked this one, it was really good. Keep posting "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.therainforestsite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
"he walks with a limp but its just for show he ain’t no pimp and he just won’t go." lol LMAO im sorry if im laughing..its not bout your poem it's something personal about a friend great write....liking it a lot keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
interesting...really... but I'd sure like to know who was in your mind when you wrote this!! anyway, I hope you don't mind, I'm going thru all of your poems, just to see what all you've written..  *s* Stace I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i liked this poem greatly...awesome job and hope to see more...marsha!  ...?i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
thanks for listening?????????????..... NO!!..  THANK-YOU FOR SHARING!!! agpfagp...no?..YES! ill look out for this guy next time im out and about and punch him for you.. "Life is not long and boring, |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ooo..everyone can find a person to fit a description like this. This person sounds like a real gimp. Hit him with a pie.  ~AF~ Know what you want. Become your real self. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I hated this person when I wrote this piece but now I kinda like him and he's one of my friends... I guess you just need to give people a chance... and not him them with pie |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i ditto what allan said...i think its rather fun to rack my brains to think of someone who will fit your description |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I thought this was hilarious!  You can sit there and forgive someone until the cows come home, and it won't make a bit of difference until they forgive themselves. |
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