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Ricky
Junior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 28
West Virginia, USA

0 posted 2001-02-26 11:46 PM

I don't know why but no one likes me,
I ask what's wrong with me, but no one can see,
But what is wrong with me, am I that ugly,
Why is it that no one will talk to me with complete honesty,

Yes, these words I speak are very harsh,
But at least these words are only bad on my part,
No one can see my tattered, old, broken heart,
It hurts so bad, like getting hit with a dart,

I feel so alone right now doing nothing but talking on AOL,
My loneliness has become my own personal hell,
I feel like I'm trapped in an unemotional jail,
The only happiness is when I'm with my band and wail,

Right now I'd take anyone at all,
Any girl blonde, brunette, short, or tall,
I don't even care if your think of the wall,
But please catch me when I fall,

The best thing I have right now is my punk rock band,
But it's not as good when I don't have one to share it with me hand and hand,
My life right now is as unsturdy as a new sailor stepping back to land,
I must leave now and try to find someone if I can.

Ricky

DreadedLiver
Member

since 2001-01-23

Posts 56
Alter, Ego

1 posted 2001-02-27 12:29 PM

Sweet line here:
"My life right now is as unsturdy as a new sailor stepping back to land,"
wow! a punk band eh? is it like an emo punk band or like a bad religion type band.. or skate punk (like millencolin, lagwagon....) nice write here, keepem coming.

JR

"zzzIzzzAMzzzJEREMYDRAULzzz"

Maitay
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA

2 posted 2001-02-27 12:32 PM

Hopefully the person you seek will come along soon. But dont accept just anyone, becuase not everyone will be worthy of you. This was an awesome poem, just remember we are all here if you ever need to talk.

~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

3 posted 2001-02-27 06:19 AM

Good expresion in this peom. I really like it. Hope things start going your way man.

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-02-27 09:35 AM

Hey Ricky, I'll love you forever if you are in a punk band.

The poem has alot of good expressions in it. I do hope things start going your way. Life though is a cheap thrill. Enjoy it! Don't start thinking thoughts like the ones mentioned above. You'll drive yourself crazy.

Smile buddy.

~AF~

"Love makes us poets and the approach of death should make us philosophers."
~ George Santayana

TwIsTeDmInD
New Member

since 2001-02-23

Posts 1
Massachusetts

5 posted 2001-02-27 02:43 PM

great poem you'll find the right person some day it seems like your a nice guy so there will be alot of grls who like you once they get out of the immature adolesent stage in there life where everything goes on money and good looks

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

6 posted 2001-02-27 04:47 PM

Very well expressed here, the poem is really good. You'll find someone when the time is right.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.therainforestsite.com

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-02-28 02:41 PM

When girls are immature they go for money and good looks? Ha.....funny......I thought they always went for the butt heads...

anyway...nice poem here ricky....all in due time.......us nice guys will have our chance.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-02-28 10:26 PM

Beautiful sentiments my friend
you expressed yourself real well
one thing though, don't look too hard
keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

9 posted 2001-03-01 03:53 PM

Ricky,
great poem. i can relate. i hope that you will soon find someone. until then keep up the great work. by the way, welcome to passions. i hope you like the new family.

chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Never say 'I Love You' unless you mean it"

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

10 posted 2001-03-01 05:38 PM

Nice poem ricky... I'm sure you will find someone to love... but it only comes when you're not searching for it, so be patient.
As for Dopey... yeah we do go for the buttheads, but it's not really on purpose, we're just attracted to losers... lol

jenn

"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia

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