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~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14
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Maine, USA

0 posted 2001-02-26 07:18 PM


( I sent this to all my friends who i hadn't talked to for a long time hehehe just thought i'd share!)

roses are red
violets are blue
i miss you so much
i'm about to eat poo.

roses are red
violets are blue
forget that last one
I didn't think it through.

roses are red
violets are blue
i'm bored as hell
i hope you are too

roses are green
in wonder-wonder land
my violets are orange
and are staining my hands!

so once again roses are red
violets are blue
i'm just wondering where you are
and what your up to!


*Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes*

© Copyright 2001 Valerie - All Rights Reserved
Elvenblood
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since 2001-02-17
Posts 409
Maine, USA
1 posted 2001-02-26 07:31 PM


lol, good one! haha, mde me laugh, good job :-)

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
2 posted 2001-02-26 08:20 PM


Very cute!! I wouldn't eat poo either. Very creative, keep writing!!

Much Luv,
~*~S*W*E*E*T*S*T*U*F*F~*~


How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it????


Acies
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3 posted 2001-02-27 10:52 PM


@Val
I like this one
though you never sent it to me

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2001-02-28 03:04 PM


Hahahaha you eat poo!!! You know it!!!!
Don't say you didn't think it through cuz you know you eat poo!!!!!
EWWWWWWWW!!!!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Isabel Galaxia
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since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

5 posted 2001-03-01 05:36 PM


Haha!! Very nice...........

Bel

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