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The Only One For Me |
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Ricky Junior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 28West Virginia, USA 
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Most of you don't know me well, but I love to make people laugh. Some of the songs I write for my band are written to make people laugh. So here is my attempt to mix love and laughter. I don't know what I'm doing, I'm so new to you, I kiss your neck and it's thrilling, But you kind of smell like poo, Why don't you shower, Am I the only one that's smelling this, Your stinch is as big as a tower, It's very hard to miss, All my friends have left now, You still don't know why, You smell kinda of like a cow, Your smell makes me want to cry, I hope this story has made you smile, I just hope you know this is not true, So I.M. me on AOL and we can talk a while, Oh wait, nevermind, you smell too.  Just for a laugh.P.S. My AOL Screen Name is BurntToast6712 Ricky |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Oh that's a good one! Humor is always good. It breaks the monotony of love poems. Not that they're bad, it's just the same subject loses it's charm. I'm such a hypocrite for saying that, because I usually write about love, or some other emotion. "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hehe this was wunnerful. Great job here, can't wait to see more stuff that makes one smile.  ~Carly "Nature is not only all that is visible to the eye--it also includes the inner pictures of the soul." ~Edvard Munch |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Cute. I would hate to be her.  |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
AHHH!! this was so good! i love reading humorous poems and i agree with Elvenblood on this one... HAHAHA i just watched a 7th Heaven episode the other day where Ruthie's friend stunk and all the kids talked about the girl, this made me think of that LOL great job!! i'd like to know where your inspiration came from hehehe ~*VALERIE*~ *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
not bad....not bad we need to smile once in a while in PIP too many sad poems but it's ok..... keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Were you dropped on your head as a child? j/k  hehe this was definitly interesting...! jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You've been to smelly towers too?!?!?!?! haha nice one here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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