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FallNTears
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since 2001-03-05
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0 posted 2001-03-07 02:31 PM


Each day I wake
Wondering the same thing
Why am I still here?
But then I realize
There is no real reason
That I could leave
And no one would care
So I ask myself
Why dont I?
A question I cant answer
Yet it torments me
Keeps me awake at night
Stalks me in my sleep
Follows me throughout the day
Allows me not a moments peace
I try to occupy my my mind
But even when I succeed,
I know
Deep down
That I cant keep hiding


*Me*

*Having a nightmare is nothing compared to living one.*

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TearsOfPearls
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa
1 posted 2001-03-07 02:40 PM


I myself have asked that question a million times...why am I here? he way I see it...ya'll neva know the answer, so just do he best you can while you are here...everything happens for a reason.

Great poem, well written...keep it up

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2001-03-07 03:33 PM


Yea the question is one that is often asked by teens. Anyway I thought you express your thoughts quite nicely.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

LoveBug
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3 posted 2001-03-07 03:50 PM


It is against the guidelines to post more than three threads in one day. Thank you.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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