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Ricky
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since 2001-02-25
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West Virginia, USA

0 posted 2001-02-25 07:20 PM


Twinkle twinkle little star,
Why do you have to be so far,
Please come down to me,
Maybe then I'd be happy,
I know don't have it so bad,
But it's been so long since I've been glad,
I am fortunate for what I got,
But in this world I feel like just a dot,

So twinkle twinkle little star,
I don't wonder who you are,
You're right infront of me,
You seem to be so happy,
I won't invade in your business,
Who knows what a punk like me could do to it,
So have a good life my little star,
I hope you don't see me looking through the window on the door.


Ricky

© Copyright 2001 Ricky - All Rights Reserved
Acies
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2001-02-26 07:23 PM


very interesting concept Ricky
whatever you wish for, if it's good, i hope you get it
thanks for the read
keep sharing


"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
2 posted 2001-02-26 08:13 PM


That was really good! Sometimes I wish I could get what I wanted by wishing on a star..but that would be too easy wouldn't it??? Well great job, keep up the great work!!

Much Luv,
~*~S*W*E*E*T*S*T*U*F*F~*~


How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it????


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3 posted 2001-02-28 02:12 PM


Nicely done here ricky!!!!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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