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Ricky Junior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 28West Virginia, USA 
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I am new to posting and I really don't write poems but I do write a lot of songs for my band. If I say something that's not suited for thie forum I'm sorry, just inform me of my faults and I will fix it. I don't know what to do, I don't know what to say, When I try to make you smile, You get in my face, I don't know what I did, To deserve all of this, I just don't understand, Why do you treat me like piss, I don't know why, But I still feel for you, But you don't care, You say go away, And tell me we're though, Well this is my love life, Something I can't help, This is my love life, My eternal hell. Ricky |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
... I am speechless. This really got to me for personal reason, and almost brought me to tears. Welcome to passions and wonderful first post. Thank you for sharing and If this is a true story I say with ~ALL~ of my heart; May everything work out ok and for the best, but most of all let your heart guide you and take you where you have never been to a place that you fall in love..........with yourself once again. Love always~ Amanda Ps. If you ever need to talk I am here for you. The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Um...Hun, is there something your not telling me? Anyways, its good to see you joined and are posting...I hope you like it here as much as I do...You dont know it, but you were the subject of many of my older poems...hehe oppps...I shouldn't have todl ya that  www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
it was very good. post some of your songs. welcome to passions. Regina |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Ricky: Welcome to the forums. I liked this one a lot. You expressed the angst of this kind of situation quite well, and with some interesting rhyming. I liked it. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh." -- Magus |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done ricky.......you're in a band? Nice one there. If you don't wanna piss anybody off because you don't know the proper things to post or anything......go read the guidlines. Anyway, well done and I hope to see more poems. You can post your lyrics too....I always post mine.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Welcome to Passions Ricky. Make sure you do post some of your songs. Lyrics are some of the many fascinating things you can read so I will be very interested to look at some. I'll be looking out for your work. ~AF~ "Love makes us poets and the approach of death should make us philosophers." ~ George Santayana |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Ricky! It's always great to see new members, and we're pleased to have you on board. As Dopey said ... we do have some guidelines that you were required to read when first registering, and prefer that you are aware of them "before" posting. If you need to have another look: /main/postings.cgi?action=newguidelines&number=45&forum=Teen+Poetry+|NMB|4 Again, welcome aboard ... I hope to read more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! It's nice to know you've decided to join our family of friends here in Passions for Poetry. I hope you enjoy PIP as much as we all do. "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
  Welcome to Passions! Great post~ id love to hear this to music sometime, unless i read worng and this wasnt a song but a poem. i do that alot Clumsy me, but great job neways *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ [This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 02-26-2001).] |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
haha DQ gave me a headache MARVELOUS first post, I hope to see some more from you and maybe hear a song or two  JR When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions Lyrics are fine with me Great job on your first post here. I hope you enjoy it here!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.therainforestsite.com |
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