»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #4
»
can we be just friends?
| Teen Poetry #4 |
|
can we be just friends? |
|
|
cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hell all.. There is more of a story behind the poem then it tells.. but its just stuff i had on my mind.. that i really wanted to get out!! Thanks We had a real thing going A while ago that is I really thought i liked you, and that we would last for quite a while, we went to movies, hung out at your house, and sumtimes mine The last letter i got from you, changed the thoughts in my mind It twisted them up and made an end I heard story after story about what was going through your head but I never heard it from you I've finally started to forget, forget about the times I had with you, The times that i really missed you when you wern't around, and the fun times, when it was just me and you It was all desapering from my mind and heart Why did you just call me? Just to come over? what do you want now? Questions run from my heart to my mind back and forth Although i can't come up with an answer Do you want me back? Do I want you back? I have no clue Now, I'm confussed, Haven't been in a while Last time i was... It was with you You hurt me then.. I belive you could do it again I hate to say it, but.. How about us just being friends...... If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Amanda - All Rights Reserved | |||
Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ohh... this got to me. Personal reasons. Yes, sometimes it is best to just be friends. Although it can hurt a ~lot~ to say so. "I have no clue Now, I'm confussed, Haven't been in a while Last time i was... It was with you" This was my favourite line. Very well said. Best of luck with the situation. -Allan The unintelligent are merely tools for the intelligent. That would make my house a veritable toolshed. ~~Allan Riverwood |
||
|
Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Dont' you just hate those people who can't seem to make up their minds. They might now be playing the game, but i sure seems like it. This I hold close to my heart for personal reasons. thanks for the read "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
||
|
anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is good Cutie...such an emotion provoking piece. This will be sticking in my head for quite some time. Keep on posting and thankyou for sharing it. ~AF~ "Love makes us poets and the approach of death should make us philosophers." ~ George Santayana |
||
|
keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
"Why did you just call me? Just to come over? what do you want now?" This sums up the past 4 months of my life you do not even understand. I know how you feel about why did this come back, but in my case I still have feelings for the person, they're not interested. I guess just tell the person the truth, save some pain for both of you. Good luck and Good poem. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
||
|
cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hello thankyou so much for the replys!!!  I do agree somepeople do need to make up there minds hehe.. Also no, i do still have feelings for this person, I just have to figure them out. I don't know if the feelings are for just a friend, or for a person to love again.. Usually i'm not up for second chances, but I have to figure it out weather i'm up for one now. Well hey thankyou for reading!! Much love, cutie If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
||
|
Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I've never been confussed.......confused maybe, but never confussed. Hehe, I'm only playing Well It looks like you kinda know what you want. If it's hurting you that bad then maybe the right choice is just friends. Good luck!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
