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The feelings of the heart
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The feelings of the heart |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
The feelings of the heart Finally you tell me what you've held deep within your heart Now, maybe we can move on, get off to a new start But I'm so scared to love someone again I don't know if I can let you in, considering where I've been I know I've had these feelings before And it scares me, I don't know what we have in store Will it be the best thing ever to come into our lives Or will the break up come too soon with pain of a hundred thousand stabbing knives So as I hesitate to let you know what feelings I hold I wonder if these new feelings will too soon grow old I do however know one thing for sure These feelings are soon going to be too much for me to endure So I think that I should take that big risk Because I know something good will become of this |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Cute poem. I detect a hint of improvement in your work lately. It's good to see you are developing your skill so nicely. -Allan The unintelligent are merely tools for the intelligent. That would make my house a veritable toolshed. ~~Allan Riverwood |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you've done well with this poem you've expressed yourself really well I'm glad to see you decided to go for it everything in life is not a sure thing each thing is a gamble...and we must take the risk sometimes thanks for sharing So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
aww this was really good sounds like somethin ive been thro keep your head up tho  *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a nicely written piece. A clear message. Well done. Do take the risk because you'll be kicking yourself later on in life if you don't. ~AF~ "Love makes us poets and the approach of death should make us philosophers." ~ George Santayana |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well it looks like you got your mind set on what you're going to do. So all I got to say is good luck!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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