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0 posted 2001-02-25 09:13 AM


this poem had been deleted cause it goes agains pip guidelines. Suicidal glorification is unacceptable in these forums. Hope you understand
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1 posted 2001-02-25 09:56 AM


Oh...that one hit home. I've been suicidal a couple times. EEk, I'm completely speechless. It's such a wonderful work though, keep writing. Welcome to Passions everyone says.

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

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2 posted 2001-02-25 03:05 PM


Excellent poem. Your afterthought was a true one, I write to lift something off my chest often. Once recorded on paper, emotions tend to drift from the body.
Great job.
-Allan

The unintelligent are merely tools for the intelligent. That would make my house a veritable toolshed. ~~Allan Riverwood

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3 posted 2001-02-25 08:04 PM


Nicely done here. I thought this poem was quite good. Very well written.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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