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~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

0 posted 2001-02-23 07:57 PM

Big white walls are crashing down,
While I try to run out.
No one looks more scared right now,
And everyone is having doubts.

Will we make it out alive?
No once really knows.
Everyone’s fears are yet the same
But you dare not let them show.

For if you do the walls come down faster,
And everyone will die.
But there is no turning back
If you do you’ll be the decry.

And in every city you go to
The decry only gets killed,
So be the opposite, be strong, be the leader
And let your dreams be fulfilled.

*Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes*

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-02-23 08:08 PM

Oh my... oh my oh my...
You really did a great job here. This was an amazing poem.
It's the best that I've read today. (nothing personal, everyone else)
And definitely the best I have read of yours.
Great job.
-Allan

The unintelligent are merely tools for the intelligent. That would make my house a veritable toolshed. ~~Allan Riverwood

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-02-23 08:11 PM

sorry for the double-post... forgot to add it to my library.

Starr
Member

since 2001-02-08

Posts 100

3 posted 2001-02-24 01:47 PM

I love this one, really, really nice!! You write with beatiful expressions... Love it!! Keep posting!! This was great!!

Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-02-24 03:12 PM

Didn't you just tell me you posted a bad poem?
I don't think so
OMG...This is one of the best poems i've read in a while
Believe it or not, this is a wonderful write

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-02-25 12:05 PM

I liked this. I thought it was ok. very good message, but it wasn't one of your bests. Still, it wasn't one of your worst either.
Mua!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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