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Neokrew
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since 2000-12-24
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0 posted 2001-03-07 01:42 PM


Hey my friends this is my final poem, you will nolonger see neokrew on piptalk I am sorry if you want to talk to me email me at Neokrew@hotmail.com please email me!
BTW this poem suckes I wrote it in a sec.

I depart now
This is over
Its through
I am gone
To you I say
Good bye!

--Neo

© Copyright 2001 J. T. C. - All Rights Reserved
TearsOfPearls
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa
1 posted 2001-03-07 02:14 PM


Hey there Neo

Man...sorry, this is sad, I know I have been away for a long long time and I don't know if I missed something here, but I find it sad that you say it's your last poem (don't know if you meant last eva or just last here in the forums)

Hope you rethink it

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
2 posted 2001-03-07 02:23 PM


Don't leave!!!! VS left us, and you're leaving and and it's starting to depress me. DONT LEAVE.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.


Dopey Dope
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
3 posted 2001-03-07 03:53 PM


Well it's sad to see you leave. Everytime a member leaves it's just horrible.....all your poems and thoughts will be missed.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Child of the Stars
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4 posted 2001-03-07 03:56 PM


We're going to miss you lots, Neo....I've read almost everything of yours, and though I didn't reply to all of it, I liked it...Well ciao...
~Carly

"The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake."
- Leonardo da Vinci

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
5 posted 2001-03-07 05:03 PM


Well I wish you wouldn't leave Thank you for sharing what you have though, it was very much appreciated.

"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
"Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it."
BothUnknown

FallNTears
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since 2001-03-05
Posts 20

6 posted 2001-03-07 07:02 PM


sorry to see ya go. i know you dont know my situation, but unfortuantely it is real, and when i am done on a subject, i stop writing before i get too personal. thats all. short and sweet thats me. anyways, sorry to see ya leave

*Me*


*Having a nightmare is nothing compared to living one.*

Isabel Galaxia
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since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

7 posted 2001-03-07 07:12 PM


Can I ask why you're leaving???
Bel

Crash&Burn
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since 2001-01-18
Posts 119

8 posted 2001-03-07 07:15 PM


I'm sorry that your going, you will be missed and hope to you the best of luck.


I see the darkness coming all is bleak…

Allan Riverwood
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9 posted 2001-03-07 07:27 PM


I didn't really grow too attached, you didn't post enough.
And you were right about this poem.
Best of luck with your life.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan


Tears of Glass
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 182
Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure
10 posted 2001-03-07 07:54 PM


*Cries* I am gonna miss seeing all of your poetry! I'm gonna miss you! (Even though I see you every day.. but that's beside the point.) Love ya!

*Jen

"My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see."

DancinQueen
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Kokomo,IN,USA
11 posted 2001-03-07 10:42 PM


aww..is there a reason for your sudden exit? or just because, either way we'll all miss you

*dq


¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Angel in Flight
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since 2001-01-07
Posts 381

12 posted 2001-03-10 01:37 PM


Neo~ I have not been at passions for a while but I say with my heart do not leave us. I do hope you are just changing your username and not truthfully leaving us, and if you are what so ever for? Please think about all the people that will miss you if you go. Love always~ Amanda Destiny~

The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny

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