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TrueLUV
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-02-23 12:49 PM


I apologize
please except it
I see how I've been acting
Believe me nothing has changed
I still see your beauty before I go to rest
I still see your smile in my dreams
I still feel your kiss when I awake
as if I am feeling your deepest passion when you dream
For you see my state of mind is filled with curiosity
I always wonder how much you care
I awlays wonder if you see us together

© Copyright 2001 TrueLUV - All Rights Reserved
jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair
1 posted 2001-02-23 02:55 PM


oooh... so meaningful and full of wisdom... Hope everythings cool, just keep on draining out these beautiful pieces

JR


When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself...

litle_krazy_poet
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since 2001-01-17
Posts 71

2 posted 2001-02-23 03:19 PM


i liked to poem i really did thatnks for the post

i write poems all the time and i post them for all of you. some times i write 4or 5 a day and then sometimes just one and i post the one that i like

Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
3 posted 2001-02-23 06:49 PM


Beautiful poem. Very meaningful,keep up the great work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Never say 'I Love You' unless you mean it"


Acies
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Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
4 posted 2001-02-24 12:01 PM


beautiful and sad
keep your head up

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope
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since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
5 posted 2001-02-24 12:04 PM


A wonderful read!
I thought this was quite sad.....get well....and I hope your other does too.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

DancinQueen
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA
6 posted 2001-02-24 05:57 PM


aww this was really cute. im with everyone else..quite sad. but beautiful keep your chin up

*dq


¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

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