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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2001-02-21 10:01 PM



I never needeā€™d punctuation?
Who. Here; with, me could disagree!
:My poems {end] with exclamation.
for... they are, powerful you, see

F0r it i$ love that hold$ me captive #
Each line__ is overfilled^ with love
E|a|c|h| word is gentle +and attractive
My re@ders c@nnot =get enough


Check out my poetry here:


http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master


© Copyright 2001 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
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State of Despair
1 posted 2001-02-22 01:37 AM


heh quite humorous.. nice change here

JR


When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself...

Elvenblood
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since 2001-02-17
Posts 409
Maine, USA
2 posted 2001-02-22 10:06 AM


LOL, I love it! Punctuation can add more feeling to a poem.

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

Tears of Glass
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 182
Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure
3 posted 2001-02-22 08:31 PM


Hehe.. very clever. I need a good laugh

*Jennifer

"My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see."

Acies
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Twilight Zone
4 posted 2001-02-23 06:23 PM


very interesting Master
very interesting indeed


So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2001-02-24 12:02 PM


Hehehe I liked this little style of yours. You are right, we can't get enough!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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