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Teen Poetry #4

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DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

0 posted 2001-02-19 10:52 PM

this is just for fun

-=Allan=-

Allan, King of charm
so seductive in his ways
learned it all from me

-=-=hey Al wheres my icecream? LOL

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

[This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 02-19-2001).]

HiddenSparklez
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2001-02-19 10:59 PM

LOL
"learned it all from me" I enjoy that line. :P

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-02-19 11:53 PM

LOL Nice poem, hon! ~_^ As ~if~ I haven't seen it before!
-Allan

[This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 02-19-2001).]

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-02-20 09:27 AM

cute.....

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-02-20 06:32 PM

acire is jealous.

Quite the witty senryu.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-02-20 07:11 PM

Dopes -- huh?

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

6 posted 2001-02-20 09:48 PM

yes i know Dope

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-02-20 11:00 PM

Not you too Kiley

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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