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Maitay Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158Sisters,OR,USA |
Forget what we've shared, everything given up. Remember why you let it end with nothing to cause regret. Trust my decision to walk away, becuase you crawled right back. Apologizing for pain and tears, hopeing to erase your mistakes. Finally I know how to be desired, I just have to be unobtainable. ~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~ ~Maitay Mirabel Litton~ [This message has been edited by Maitay (edited 02-19-2001).] |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
wow~ this fit me to a T. beautiful work. i like your quote,too. oh and its decision  sorry just being picky dont take offense*dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Good poem, thought it was smart of you to fit everything in one stanza. Good job. "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
nicely done here! I liked this a lot. You write quite well and I've never seen you around. You oughta come round more.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Very insightful piece. I thought a neat format would compliment it, but you did a good job anyway. Keep up the good work. -Allan The unintelligent are merely tools for the intelligent. That would make my house a veritable toolshed. ~~Allan Riverwood |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Strong words, my friend. This was very well-written. Thank you for sharing!  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Seems to work that way doesn't it. People seem to always go for the challenge. So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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