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pixiechild
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0 posted 2001-02-19 12:14 PM


The crush has died away..
feeling it stronger by the day
Just friends we will be.
best of friends if it was up to me!
Hope my feelings I once had,
didn't mess up our friendship to bad?
Luckly you understood,
keeping our friendship close and good

Can't explain what I feel now
got over you somehow,
but you still have a place in my heart
although we stay so far apart..
Closer we will soon become
maybe it will be hard for some..
to accpt that we are two of a kind,
but it's not all that hard to find...

What we have is special to me
more than friends (I realize) we'll never be..
but all that matters in the end..
is that you are still my friend!!!


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1 posted 2001-02-19 03:16 PM


I'm glad things are still working out for you eventhough original plans didn't work out. Not too many people can do the same thing as you two have done.
thanks for the read
keep sharing

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2 posted 2001-02-19 09:14 PM


Well it's good that yer friends or he's your friend.....ya know? At least yer not enemies and stuff. Sometimes when somebody loses feelings, the friendship can go to hell.
Anyway nice job here.



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3 posted 2001-02-19 11:20 PM


That was good. Too bad things didn't work out, but I've learned that I'd rather have a friend in a guy than a boyfriend out of a best friend any day. Did that make any sense at all? Set your sights on some other guy, one who can return your feelings Glad it all was worked out.
Rhonda


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4 posted 2001-02-19 11:52 PM


I think this was nice. After a relationship it's hard to remain friends. Lucky you I guess. But it's good for both of you in the long run... I know!!
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