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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
i know that is has been a while cince i have posted a poem but i was commited to a hospittle  because of my poetry that i can't share here because of the subject matter. but i'm back and there is one of the many poems that i wrote while i was gone and i cleaned it up a lot so if it sounds kinda wired it is becaused i had to chang some words. well i hope you like and i will reply to any posts that you give so check on it from time to time. well here it is.Wonderful Wonderful Wonderful that is how people want to world peaceful peaceful peaceful that is how people want my town joyful joyful joyful that is how my dad sees are family Happy Happy Happy that is how people see me secured up secured up secured up that is the world messed up messed up messed up that is the town depressed depressed depressed that is me somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun [This message has been edited by litle_krazy_poet (edited 02-21-2001).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I'm sorry you're feeling depressed Litle_Krazy_Poet, but you've expressed yourself well in this piece. You've shown two different viewpoints of the world very well, and I do hope that with the positive influences around you, you may soon find a nice medium where your spirits will be lifted. Take care ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm sorry that you feel this way about yourself and the wrold right now. All I can say is if sharing poetry helps you, please do share more of your work. Just limit it to 3 a day though  So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Lil Krazy Poet: This one reminds me of a poem I wrote a while back, called We the People. I am sorry to hear that you are so depressed. I know how you're feeling. The world is often filled with lies. Sometimes I've felt like everybody's diluded themselves because they don't want to acknowledge the fact that life has no meaning. But I've been recently finding that life is what you make of it. I know I know, that sounds kinda gorky, but it's a good thing to remember. But enough about me. I hope that you find your way to your own type of happiness. I know the world often paints its own picture of how you're supposed to be. Let them waste paint. You go and paint your own picture. [This message has been edited by fractal007 (edited 02-19-2001).] |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
You got to go to the hospital too?!kool. no seriously it was a very intersting poem, you showed as many ppl already said two views which are totally opposite. If you ever need to talk, I know what your going through. Regina for those who say I'm their friend, u know me not well for if u did u would not stay around anymore to watch me fall away. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea sometimes that's the truth. We all feel this way sometimes so don't feel all alone...  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
I understand this completely. What people want to see, and what is actually there are 2 completely different things. And some times people get so caught up in what they want to be there that they never see what is actually there, because they don't want to. Well I hope u are feeling better soon!! Ur poem was great, I luved it! much luv, Priscilla How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 02-19-2001).] |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
I'm sorry you feel this way. Your poem was really good though. Keep writing and keep posting. Looking forward to reading more of your work. |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
kit:well i'm trying and well i'm trying. acire: well i'm sorry that i write more than you can handle i'll try to keep down my creativity fractal007: well thaks for that i'll try to see it that way. ina: ya i did i have had to go to the "hopsitle" i like it not like others well thanks for your post. Dopy: ya all alone sweetstuff: aint that the truth greeneyes: thanks just thanks somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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