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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2001-02-18 08:51 PM


The Angels Dance
Every night to amuse my aching soul
They spin around singing telling me to let it all go
Their lullabye reaches up to the stars in the sky
And one by one they begin to fall
As they the Angels Dance and sing me a lullabye

I wonder if they'll be there every time
To ease my tears with their soothing rhymes
Without them I would never know what to do
Perhaps drown in my moments of misery

I'm thankful more than ever
With them by my side
And watching them dancing amongst the candlelight
And wrapping me in their comfortable angel wings
And soothing my aching soul with the music that they sing...



"Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night"

~Crash and Burn~

© Copyright 2001 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-02-18 10:58 PM


amazing, simply amazing
hope you feel better soon
i'm loving every line
hope you start sharing more soon
thanks for the amazing read

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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2 posted 2001-02-19 12:05 PM


Well Hey i haven't seen you around in such a long time!!! I liked the poem and urge you to come around more often!!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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