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Don't Let Me...
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Don't Let Me... |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
This came from a lot of thinking about my best friend. If a certain day ever comes Please, Don't think any less of me Don't leave me to myself Don't let me crumble away If my day comes any day soon Please, Don't give up on me Don't let me slip away Don't lose faith in me If my time comes, Please, Don't ever forget me Don't forget the memories Don't forget the real reason why we have the relationship we have You know I'm bound to make mistakes You know I'm bound to make you cry But when I do, Please, Don't let me discourage you Don't let me lose your trust Don't let me get to you Like you've gotten to me "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
WoW!! This is a very Strong/Powerful poem you have writen, and I am extremely happy you have posted it today for all to see. I believe it has great meaning and truth that we all could learn from and use in your life. (putting into my library) Wonderful read. ~*~Amanda~*~ The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
lot of sentiments beautifully penned seems like you've some doubt on yourself be strong ok? and keep your head up thanks for the share So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
powerful here.....i liked it a lot.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Wow... what a twist on the ending. I absolutely love it. You really surprised me there. It's a very strong poem. You did a great job. The format was also very unique. It workred with the situation excellently. -Allan The unintelligent are merely tools for the intelligent. That would make my house a veritable toolshed. ~~Allan Riverwood |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Wow...great poem...made me think of my relationship with my best friend. It was wonderfully written...I hope to read more from you soon ~Nikki~ |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Thanks, for all the comments... I really appreciate 'em.  "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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