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Wheelsgirl
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since 2001-02-09
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MA, USA

0 posted 2001-02-17 10:41 PM


Brother

I have someone special I am always will be growing with in
some way.
Whether it be from the heart or mind, whatever way is okay.

This person is you, you may not know it because I don't say
it as much as I should, but... I love you.

I hope that we never drift apart,
because if we do I'll have a big empty whole in my heart.

So now I ask you to listen, in the future when you take on a
life of your own...

Please think before you act, make choices smart.
I hope we never tragically part. Shawn I hope you feel the
same.


© Copyright 2001 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2001-02-18 11:49 AM


Very sweet tribute to your brother. I liked this very much. Maybe he should read this.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Angel in Flight
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since 2001-01-07
Posts 381

2 posted 2001-02-18 05:40 PM


This is truthfully a heart felt poem and I am very appreciative that you shared it with us all. I also believe you should share this with your brother. Love always~Amanda~

The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny

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3 posted 2001-02-18 10:48 PM


Most sweet tribut to your brother
He must be really someone special
thanks for the read

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Ski*Chick
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since 2001-01-13
Posts 141
Fitchburg, Mass, Usa
4 posted 2001-02-19 12:20 PM


Kelly very nice poem. I like it. Talk to you later, your friend Minna
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