A Broken Heart Because Of Broken Promises

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Teen Poetry #4

A Broken Heart Because Of Broken Promises

Wheelsgirl
Junior Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 21
MA, USA

0 posted 2001-02-17 10:32 PM

A Broken Heart Because Of Broken Promises

Why do people make promises they can’t keep?

Is their a reason why I’m so gullible?... What makes me this way?

Do I always have to set myself up for disappointment?... Why do I do it?

People say to me, “Oh yeah I can do this for you” or “Oh yeah I can do that
for you” and it never happens... That makes me so mad!

When are people going to learn not to make promises that they can’t keep?...
Maybe never!!!!!!!!

Why does their have to be people in this world that would do such an awful
thing?... Like break someone’s heart!!!!!

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

1 posted 2001-02-17 10:55 PM

Well I like it!! lol I don't know about anyone else, but I think it has great emotion in it. And I hope it doesn't happen to you (again maybe).

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-02-18 12:01 PM

HEY! This was pretty good and I can't really answer why people break hearts.....but hey.....it's life i guess.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

HiddenSparklez
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-02-18 03:03 PM

Not too bad... the format could improve. But the emotion and feeling was there for sure. Your question is actually the one question I keep asking myself... lemme know when you find the answer.

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-02-18 10:29 PM

Unfortunately, I don't have the answer to your questions? You have shown such emotions on this piece. I'm sorry you feel this way right now. hope things get better.

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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