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Angel Bee
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since 2001-01-30
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Virginia

0 posted 2001-02-17 09:23 PM


*~You and me~*


I have all these new feelings for you
And now I'm not sure what I should do
I've always thought of you as just a friend
And thought thats the way it would be to the end
Now I cant stop thinking of you
I've been thinking of all the good and bad times we've been through
And I realize that we kind of just fit together
We've been there for each other through all kinds of weather
What makes me so happy,is what happens to few
its that you feel the same way too
You have opened up so much for me
you and I together is just the way it should be



© Copyright 2001 Angel Bee - All Rights Reserved
StratMatt
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since 1999-09-19
Posts 87
Macomb, IL, U.S.A.
1 posted 2001-02-17 11:08 PM


very lovely poem. You are very blessed to have someone so close to you that you care about so much.


Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2001-02-18 12:05 PM


Very good poem!!!
I liked this a lot.....I feel you on this very much!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Angel in Flight
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since 2001-01-07
Posts 381

3 posted 2001-02-18 05:48 PM


Aww such a simply lovely poem. I know exactly how this is and you expressed it wonderfully. Great job on this.

The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny

Elvenblood
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since 2001-02-17
Posts 409
Maine, USA
4 posted 2001-02-18 05:59 PM


Wow, I love it! There are a lot of cases when people grow from just friends to that something more that doens't have a real title. It's happened to me, because I'm blind to when I'm in love, or when I'm loved. i'm cursed. Thanks for the good poem though - to the library it goes!

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

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5 posted 2001-02-19 09:00 AM


very sweet poem if i may say
seems like you've figure what you want out
that's good
thanks for the read
keep sharing

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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