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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA 
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Tears of heaven fall floating lights all around me night brings contentment "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
nice haiku, keep writing |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Pretty good. I am a big fan of the Haiku/Senryu format myself. Night is a good thing, isn't it? ^_^ Once one can just appreciate the stars, life becomes a lot easier. You expressed this well. A haiku/senryu a day keeps the writer's block away! Keep up the great work. I'm really enjoying what I've seen of yours so far. -Allan When the sun dies, and the earth is thrown off its axis, the two of us will still, at that moment, be thinking of one another. ~~Allan, to Amanda |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done! I liked your haiku  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good job on your haiku, I like it  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.therainforestsite.com |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
ohh... I like this one very much!!!  The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you did a good job keep writing and sharing So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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