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pixiechild
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since 2001-02-02
Posts 35


0 posted 2001-02-17 11:03 AM


Why is it hard for people to accept who we are
don't they think we know it's bazare...
for them to see us living the way we do,
some of us are happy and that is true!
believe it or not
a life we've got
we know how it feels to love and care for,
and sometimes we love it even more

We are not all that bad
don't you think it makes us mad,
that we walk in public past people like you
and all you can do
is whisper and fingerpoint in horror
as some of us wear a spikey collar
and all we do is smile and wafe
walk furher satisfied, cause a fright we gave


We have feeling to know,
and what you think of us doesn't bother us so..
that we are going to commit suicide or die
there's alot of our kind and that's no lie
You may call yourself normal
and dress very formal
We think of ourselves as original not weird
and when we go out we get chilled to be feird
by people such as yourselves
cause we see you as little elves.


© Copyright 2001 Chantelle - All Rights Reserved
Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
1 posted 2001-02-17 05:04 PM


yes, people should not be judged by the way the look
Unfortunately this world is full of stereo-typing
In the end, people tend to forget that no matter what, others have feelings too
Ii'm glad you've shown your strength in this poem
keeo your head up

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Elvenblood
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since 2001-02-17
Posts 409
Maine, USA
2 posted 2001-02-18 10:38 AM


Fantastic work, we obviously think alike, because I hate it when someone judges another on appearance. We all find ourselves in different ways, the more original the better. Great work, keep it up.

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

Dopey Dope
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
3 posted 2001-02-18 11:41 PM


Very nice job on this one.....judge not by appearance but by content.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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