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sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
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just about where I want to be

0 posted 2001-02-16 06:50 PM


Words...
Said hours ago
Still felt on my heart

Words...
So heartless
I stand in tears

Words...
So uncaring
It tears me apart

I can't take it anymore
I won't listen to your
Heartless, uncaring
Words...

Feb. 13, 2001


~*~SCG~*~

© Copyright 2001 Lavada Miller - All Rights Reserved
Acies
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Twilight Zone
1 posted 2001-02-17 02:32 AM


nice to see you again SCG
what's going on?
update us, will ya?


So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

jytree
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 336
omaha ark usa
2 posted 2001-02-17 04:59 PM


I will never get over you writting sad poem I mean they are good but it is not you
but it is my oppion,

Dear hottiet write from within your heart,
For in turn we shall nver be apart,
Close you eyes fall alsleep,
when you open them again we shall meet.


Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel



Elvenblood
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since 2001-02-17
Posts 409
Maine, USA
3 posted 2001-02-17 08:28 PM


Wow, power while reserving frailty and pain. I love it. you do good work; real talent.

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

Dopey Dope
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2001-02-18 11:41 AM


Is everything ok with you? Hope so.....
lots of pain in this one.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Angel in Flight
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since 2001-01-07
Posts 381

5 posted 2001-02-18 05:34 PM


Oh this one hurt me to read it. I'm going to ditto what dopey said. And I hope everything turns out for the best.

The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny

sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
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just about where I want to be
6 posted 2001-02-21 06:34 PM


Everything is fine, ya'll...need for concern. I am fine..I have no idea how many times I have to tell ya'll...I ONLY WRITE WHAT COMES TO ME!!! It's not because I feel this way, but I know other people do! I guess I'm just voicing wrds others are afraid to speak out loud! But thanks for caring anyway!



~*~SCG~*~

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
7 posted 2001-02-22 04:56 PM


aw..forget it. I was going to write something, but I just forgot.

~*~SCG~*~

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair
8 posted 2001-02-23 02:53 PM


hehe nice bump there... I liked this one a lot...good description on how those words can hurt people

JR


When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself...

TrueLUV
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.
9 posted 2001-02-23 03:46 PM


The truth hurts sometime, but it takes a bigger person to listen to them great piece
sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
10 posted 2001-03-01 02:40 PM


Thanks Jeremy...for noticing my *bump* :O

Thanks for replying TRUEluv..I'm glad you liked it!

~*~SCG~*~

Lakewalker
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11 posted 2001-03-01 05:01 PM


So I'm a little late, give me a break Good job on this, the repition of "words" worked well!

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