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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-02-16 04:21 PM


I can't gp on like that anymore,
i can't keep living like this.
I need to find who I am soon,
I need just one last kiss.
One last kiss to tell me,
if there's anything there,
if we're meant to be,
or if you even care.
one last kiss to say,
all that's been unsaid,
and to clear all the thoughts,
right out of my head.
One last kiss.


I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.


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1 posted 2001-02-16 07:29 PM


Allysa
what's going on now?
hope things are better
sad but beautiful poem
thanks for the read
keep sharing

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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2 posted 2001-02-16 10:46 PM


Yeah, I hope everything is okay.
You sound like you are expressing desperation in this poem.
Here's a nice kiss from me.
**KISS**
Hope it helps. ^_^
Good poem.
-Allan

When the sun dies, and the earth is thrown off its axis, the two of us will still, at that moment, be thinking of one another. ~~Allan, to Amanda

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3 posted 2001-02-18 01:33 AM


Good luck allysa........hopefully things fly yer way.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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4 posted 2001-02-19 01:51 AM


Alyssa,
Sad but wonderful poem...Hope things are going alot better...hope to read more things from you soon.

Allysa
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5 posted 2001-02-20 08:18 AM


I'm having an interesting life. If Justin would just answer his gosh g danged phone, I'd have a lot better time. Thanks Allan, it helps. I'll keep you posted when i figured out what's up.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.


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6 posted 2001-02-25 02:19 PM


This was great poem...i've felt like this in the past. Great job
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