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First some humor then a lil something to think

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Crash&Burn
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0 posted 02-16-2001 12:16 AM       View Profile for Crash&Burn   Email Crash&Burn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Crash&Burn

I hope you all enjoy I made these 2 some time ago, not showed em to many people. Tell me what you think
My true companion
I sit here in boredoms abyss
with my cheery companion Piss.
What hopes for tomorrow?
What dreams will be achieved?
I wonder, I look, then wonder some more
All I have in my endless question
my only strand of something other than this
is the one the only, still cheery, Piss.
Turning to the darkness,
darker still,
no end to all this ponder,
no end to this sad road.
Yett all my hope are not at bliss,
because as always, still is sitting, always cheery my lil dog Piss.
Now here's the second one I hope you like


Life?
Once amid in wonder;
I can't help but ponder;
I ask, no answer, I ask again
What is this life I live?
Now do not let the wise fool you;
For this question could forever trouble your mind;
Being such a tiny trifle;
Still I ask you;
My reader;
Why waste your life in ponder?
When all you can do is wonder.
May this answer satisfy your hunger;
Live your life, for you only get 1 chance.
I hope you like and I await your thoughts

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Dopey Dope
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1 posted 02-16-2001 02:28 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Hey jorge......well I liked the first one. I thought it was pretty cool hehe. The second one was nice too.
Nice to see you posting here pal....




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I admire it daily
Crash&Burn
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2 posted 02-16-2001 02:58 PM       View Profile for Crash&Burn   Email Crash&Burn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crash&Burn

well umm thanx allwho read or at least skimmed I hope you enjoyed
Dark Enchantress
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3 posted 02-16-2001 03:09 PM       View Profile for Dark Enchantress   Email Dark Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dark Enchantress's Home Page   View IP for Dark Enchantress

At first I was like, "What the..." and then it all clicked. I'm really slow sometimes. Oke, maybe often. lol

Spifforific poem.


and in the end
we still pretend
the time we spend
not knowing when
we're finally free
and you could be
-NIN "The Wretched"

Angel of Darkness
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4 posted 02-17-2001 12:03 PM       View Profile for Lakewalker   Email Lakewalker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lakewalker

Good job on these!


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5 posted 02-17-2001 02:57 PM       View Profile for Jenn Cirrincione   Email Jenn Cirrincione   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenn Cirrincione

You named your puppy piss?? That's sad...
However... these were very good... nice job!

xoxo
Jenn


"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia


Crash&Burn
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6 posted 08-08-2001 04:33 PM       View Profile for Crash&Burn   Email Crash&Burn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crash&Burn

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

 
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