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StratMatt Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 87Macomb, IL, U.S.A. |
Lithium, I cry out to thee. I need you to regulate I need you to emulate I need you to dull this knife called depression My joy has died and in its succession is darker days and louder storms But with you near they take a form far less imposing and nowhere near as inspiring of such powerful fear. Lithium, I cry out to thee Abandon me please But only if my heart is solaced Help me distinguish the fake from The Real. The real that is love, the fake that is pain yet my hear and mind take both the same. Help me. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
that was truely amazing... i hate depression and it seems like i fall into it a lot, hope you get better Jeremy Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark. |
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LucidityNow Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 118Canada |
Bravo, this was really good. Hope you feel better. and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
very nicely done. I really liked this poem. Good luck with the future, this poem displays pain and pain is BAD....so get well.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Doesn't it make you just want to scream? Ugh. Anyway, this was a wonderful poem. I mean really. You expressed your feelings very well. And I have to disagree, Dopey. Pain is growth.  and in the end we still pretend the time we spend not knowing when we're finally free and you could be -NIN "The Wretched" Angel of Darkness [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 02-16-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
this is a goor write. thoughts nicely penned doewn. I hope things get better for you. keep your head up So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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