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Alphabetical Philosophy |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Alphabetical Philosophy: A B C D E Shadow of a hovering bee. F G H I J A kiss on the lips if I may. K L M N O The wisdom I should surely know. P Q R S T My boat skimming over the sea. U V W X Y The humor of a childs lie. Z's sexual dream. The great alphabetical team.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Eh... this one was a bit wierd on me. I suppose the restriction was rhyming with letters. It was a neat idea. The words "Sexual Dream" really raised my eyebrows. At least that much can be said. ^_^ Not bad, Dopey. You tried something new, and it turned out alright. Maybe this will appeal more to someone other than me. It would make a neat challenge though... but hey, we are still all hurting after Jeremy's. Interesting. -Allan When the sun dies, and the earth is thrown off its axis, the two of us will still, at that moment, be thinking of one another. ~~Allan, to Amanda |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Dopey's finally decided to share us his masterpieces again  ABCDE there's a really good poet, his names Dopey FGHIJ His graced us with his talent if i may say So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
not bad not bad..a bit of a change from all other posts but still you managed to get a good post out of it.. "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Not one of your best, but certainly interesting. You have the natural ability of being creative without limits. You show us that over and over...  I am no one if not myself. Angel of Darkness |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
nice nice... trying new things is a good idea.. i actually enjoyed this one Jeremy Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This was creative, but it just didn't do a lot for me. For me it was good, but not great. Know what I mean? "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Believe me, I know exactly what you mean lake haha....... I despise this piece. It's a bit of a creative piece.....not one to flaunt my writing skills with, if any. Anyway thanks for the posts..... I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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