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Greeneyes617
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since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

0 posted 2001-02-15 12:23 PM

I don't know what has happened between me and my best friend. All I do now is that we haven't talked in a while and its bugging me. I don't know if I did something wrong or what. But right now I feel alone in a crowd of people. So....this is what I wrote.

Where is the friend I have always loved?
The one who listened and wiped away my tears,
The one who made me laugh at the smallest things,
The one who was there to pice up the broken peices of my heart,
The one who gave me courage,
The one who "taught" me how to express myself,
The one who was always by my side,
The one who has now tore down my pride,
The one who I must have hurt or said something wrong to,
I am sorry.

StratMatt
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since 1999-09-19

Posts 87
Macomb, IL, U.S.A.

1 posted 2001-02-15 04:10 AM

Very nice free verse. I know it's always hard to fight with a friend, and the more disorganized chaotic free verse seems to strike more energy into the problems of life than more versed, rhyming poetry. It's amazing how big of a difference form can be in poems like this.

I look forward to reading more of your stuff!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-02-15 09:15 AM

that is so emotional
you know, i actually feel this way right now

thanks for sharing

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2001-02-15 04:21 PM

I bet you could write the story of my life!
I liked this, but I am sorry you must go through this.

xoxo
Jenn

"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia

Greeneyes617
Member

since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-02-15 05:10 PM

Thank you for your replys. Hopefully my friend will read this. I am a stubborn female, so saying something like this to a guy is a little hard. That's why I wrote it down.

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes617 (edited 02-15-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-02-15 07:27 PM

Very nice.....i'm sad that you and yer friend are kinda seperating like that......drifting away from each other. Hopefully all gets well soon.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Greeneyes617
Member

since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

6 posted 2001-02-15 10:03 PM

Yeah, its really hard to lose a friend. espically one who has made such an impact on my life. A half a year ago my best friend moved, and I haven't heard for her since. I know that if she showed up on my door step and needed me. I would help. The same thing goes in this realationship. If we do "end" our friend ship, and he ever needs me, I'll help.
Thanks for your replys.

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