Jeremy's Haiku Challenge - Blades

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Teen Poetry #4

Jeremy's Haiku Challenge - Blades

Allan Riverwood

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0 posted 2001-02-14 05:50 PM

(This was actually more difficult than I had expected. Thanks for another Senryu/Haiku challenge, Jer! Well, here's mine. Enjoy.)

peaceful coward tree
kissed with crimson razor blades
imitating man

Acies

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1 posted 2001-02-14 05:55 PM

that is really good AR --- very imaginative

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Lakewalker
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2 posted 2001-02-14 06:01 PM

Very good, I salute you for meeting the challenge too

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LoveBug

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3 posted 2001-02-14 08:13 PM

Wow.. a very interesting way of seeing the image. It's amazing how each person draws their own meaning from it. Challenge well met, my friend.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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4 posted 2001-02-14 09:29 PM

Very nicely done.....I loved this.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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I admire it daily

jeremydraul
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State of Despair

5 posted 2001-02-14 10:05 PM

wow, def. one of the best ones!

Jeremy

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Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

6 posted 2001-02-17 05:03 PM

Excellent! May we use this in an upcoming issue of Digital Passions? Just reply here or send me an email. Thanks

Allan Riverwood

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7 posted 2001-02-17 05:11 PM

I'm flattered, Poet. By all means...
Let's make ourselves known! ^_^

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