Reflect me as I am... (repost?)

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Reflect me as I am... (repost?)

Master
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2001-02-14 03:03 PM

“Reflect me as I am, — three-dimensional!
Do not flatten me with your exterior,
rather curve from all the conventional
and engulf me,-- first the inferior

and then cover it up with affinity.
Swallow light and reflect its radiance,
capture everything in your vicinity,
and invert the lines of your radius

as to include all of the outwardly,--
everything that is our of your medium.
In a sense, I guess that I’m cowardly,
I’m afraid of the permanent tedium

of the life on this side of the border...
so I beg you reflect me, I’m sinking!”--
Thus I prayed to oblivious water,
as the puddles were drying and shrinking.

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 02-14-2001).]

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-02-14 06:58 PM

you are obviously very talented
i'm glad youve decided to post more
you have such a huge vocabulary
loving it
keep sharing

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-02-15 06:34 PM

Yet another anaming poem. I loved this one. I thought it was great. What is your secret?

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

3 posted 2001-02-16 05:16 PM

this was soooo good!! I LOVE IT!! hehehe i love the flow... the rhyming. very nice.

~*Valerie*~

*Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes*

Angel in Flight
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

4 posted 2001-02-17 09:07 PM

Master, You have such talent I absolutly love all of your poetry I have read to date. Keep on posting you have wonderful words of wisdom.

Life is like a storm, it passes you by without even knowing it~Amanda

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