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TearsOfPearls
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since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

0 posted 2001-02-14 01:11 PM

Trapped in a cage
of selfdestruction,
tied down tightly
to a rage addiction.
Tantrums and screams
can't help tonight,
no one can hear
as you hopelessly fight.
You have to face it,
you have to see
this decieving demon,
it cannot be.
There's no doubt,
tonight there's no way out.

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

1 posted 2001-02-14 05:03 PM

A well-written poem, my friend. We all have times when we feel there is no way out, but believe me, there is always a way out! One great way out is through your writing, and I hope you'll always have that release. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-02-14 09:14 PM

Lovebug stole what I was gonna say

It is true, there is ALWAYS a way out
So, don't ever ever give up
great poem
if sharing helps you
then keep sharing

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-02-15 06:39 PM

Very nicely done. I liked this a lot. Written in a moment of desperation.
very nice job here!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

4 posted 2001-07-03 04:18 PM

I disagree with a couple of these replies..
sometimes there ISNT a way out and you're stuck staring at the decieving demon. Well.. as times goes.. A WAY OUT MAY APPEAR but sometimes you're just stranded!! Sometimes that way out is you realizing that you should pray... prayer is always there as a way out and, yes in most respects there is a way out because of this wonderful, powerful thing called prayer.. but what one must understand is what TearsforPearls is trying to convey! There CAN BE no way out.. sometimes..

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

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