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zorkon65
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since 2000-04-22
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0 posted 2001-02-14 01:07 PM


this poem is like a companion to "I never meant to hurt you",though this one was writtin first there are lines in it that draw from that poem, I didnt have that in mind when I wrote them, but that is what happend, if you find them and tell me what they are I give you a cookie

I love you
By Charlie herring

I love you
So why can't I say it?
I love you
Why don’t I display it?
I love you
Do you feel the same?
I love you
Give me a sign
I love you
Give me a little time
I love you
I want to scream it
I love you
I want to sing it
I love you
Don’t know how you would react
I love you
If I said it to your face
I love you
Should I change the pace?
I love you
In this race we run?
I love you
And turn my jogging to a run?
I love you
From the bottom of my heart
I love you
To the farthest of the stars
I love you
From the earth to the moon
I love you
This feeling is so vast
I love you
Deeper then the deepest sea
I love you
More then I can ever be
I love you
Why can't you just see?
I love you
But how do u feel?
I love you
Should I take a chance?
I love you
Should I join the dance?
I love you
Lend my voice to the song?
I love you
Tell you to your face?
I love you
Can I find the courage to say?
I LOVE YOU


work like you don't need the money,
dance like no one's watching, and
love like you've never been hurt

© Copyright 2001 charlie Herring - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2001-02-14 05:29 PM


you have to tell her
it's hard but you have to
you'll never know the answers to your questions if you don't
just don't blurt it out
timing is essential
good luck

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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Member Patricius
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2001-02-15 07:04 PM


Nicely done here........I love you too.

Well sometimes you can't really say I LOVE YOU......i don't know.....sometimes it causes more harm than good. You be the judge seeing as how it's your situation.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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