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Angel Bee
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since 2001-01-30
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Virginia

0 posted 2001-02-13 05:11 PM


I'll be there

I'll be here for you through thick and thin
Through the sun, rain, and the wind
I'll never ever leave your side
All your secrets in me you can confide
I'll be there for you when you need me most
From here until the furthest coast
I'll be there for you no matter where you are
weather it be here, there,near or far
So I make this promise unto you
I'll be here no matter what you're going through
Life life knowing someone cares
No matter what happens I'll be there

© Copyright 2001 Angel Bee - All Rights Reserved
Dark Enchantress
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meet Morgana
1 posted 2001-02-13 05:19 PM


This is so touching...like one of those heartwarming poems you read in Hallmark cards. Keep it up

I am no one if not myself.

Angel of Darkness



Ina
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada
2 posted 2001-02-13 05:41 PM


it was so sweet and beautiful. very warm and romantic...its good for valentine's day.
Regina

for those who say I'm their friend, u know me not well for if u did u would not stay around anymore to watch me fall away.

Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
3 posted 2001-02-13 09:28 PM


Nice one here, I liked it a lot. Very sentimental.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies
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4 posted 2001-02-14 04:49 PM


oh Angel bee, that is so sweet
you must be a person with such a big heart
thanks for the read

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Lakewalker
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5 posted 2001-02-15 10:13 PM


Good job on this one, it's so nice

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katherine
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Canberra Australia
6 posted 2001-02-16 04:52 AM


Hey great poem! so sweet!! keep it up

~kate~

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