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Andrea4writes Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 31Fayetteville, NC USA |
Did I tell you to much Did I try to hard Did I take to big of a jump Should I have let you hold my heart. Did I really need this junk To cloud my life Will I ever recover For I think that I found the love of my life. Should I have taken a chance Or should I have just stayed away Why is my life so confusing Will I ever be the same. Do I really need you this much, How will I ever survive Since I met you my life has been A roller coaster ride. Up and down Round and round Never knowing when it will stop, Only hoping to ride one more time. Never wanting to let you go, Because you have given me The time of my life. Hoping this fairy tale will never end, I take a deep breath and i jump again <3Andrea ~luvs~ Anthony,<3 You only live once so live it to the fullest.. Love comes and goes but friends stay for ever~!~!~!~!~! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Good! Nice poem here... the words were really heart-felt. Beautiful expressions I must say.. I hope this ride never ends for you! Jeremy "Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark." - Jeremy Raulinaitis---'Fading Me Away' |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one a lot. I thought it was written quite nicely.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Ditto.  I am no one if not myself. Angel of Darkness |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good job on this poem and I hope you're feeling great  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very heart felt poem wish dating was as easy as "you, me, ok, let's date, no questions asked" unfortunately it isn't  we have to work for and hurt to get it HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY  So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
I know I'm a little late replying to this but it was wonderful. You did an awesome job. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Yeah I agree with acire... it's never easy. This was a really good poem tho. I liked it a lot. xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
wow yeah i really like this. straight to the library great expression of your emotions, keep it up*dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
This was soooo good! I LOVE IT!! i absolutely love it. it's goin in the library no question about it. I love how you pose questions that everyone thinks about but no one dares to say out loud. about giving your heart out too soon... anyways, i think i'm just rambling now hehehe great job!! VALERIE  *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Wonderful POEM!!!!! I love this so much and I will be adding this to my library. Keep posting always and great v-day poem. Life is like a storm, it passes you by without even knowing it~Amanda |
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