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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I try to forget to regain control but still you remain embedded in my soul I wrote this actually around June of last year, but I figured I'd post it anyway. It's just a short little thing...at the time though it said everything it needed to. I am no one if not myself. Angel of Darkness |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
all true love is hard to let go. everyone you meet and love takes a little bit of your heart ans soul with them when they leave or whatever the situation may be. Beautiful short spiel! Best wishes... ~*~Jessica~*~ "Tell me why you cry" |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
wow, your great at putting alot of meaning into a small amount of words. They always seem to go straight to my heart...but it's kinda shocking since it's so small..kinda like a dart, anyways you seem to be rather comfortable with that form. Keep posting. >¶Øʆ< |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very nicely done. You have been writing very good stuff lately.....Keep it up!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Knight of Fire New Member
since 2001-02-13
Posts 2Maryland |
Short & sweet...gotta love it... |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i too see no point in continuing the poem. It told everything indeed amazing Dark keep sharing So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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