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StarPryncess17
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0 posted 2001-02-12 10:47 PM



Dreading the moment
when it becomes time
when all my fears come true
when all of the uncertainties
become a horrific reality
wishing for more time
to cherish with tender love
every hug
every kiss
every breath
every enchanting word
those beautiful eyes
they're my salvation
my quiet place
you're my salvation
my love
I couldn't do it with out you

heading down a path
of lonely days
and tear-filled nights
after we say good bye
both of us wondering
what will come of us
if the time and distance will
tear us apart
the pain
the tears
bittersweet
only time can tell my love
how both of us will feel
when you come back to me
or when you just come back

the only certainty
the only thing we know
for sure
is the love we share
it's unconditional
it's changed us in
tremendous ways
so babe, I'm telling you
I LOVE YOU
and my heart will ALWAYS
belong to you and only you
so when you come back to me
my soulmate
I'm here
waiting
missing you every second
of every day
keep yourself safe
and come back to me!!

~*~To my dearest christopher upon his leaving to join the Marines...I LOVE YOU and come back to me safely!! the look in your eyes when we make love will be forever etched in my heart and will remain in my dreams forever...until you come back to me. thank you so much for the last year...happy anniversary babe~*~



"Tell me why you cry"

© Copyright 2001 Jessica Lynn - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-02-12 11:34 PM


LOVELY!!!
What a sweet poem, just in time for V's Day. ^_^
It is heartbreaking that your soulmate is off to the marines. Keep him close to your heart, and never forget that look in his eyes. ~_^
Thanks so much for sharing. This is so lovely! It made me think of someone.
Great job!
-Allan

When the sun dies, and the earth is thrown off its axis, the two of us will still, at that moment, be thinking of one another. ~~Allan, to Amanda

[This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 02-13-2001).]

Acies
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2 posted 2001-02-13 11:26 AM


Oh Jess
be strong, ok?
This is defenitely your most heart felt poem
you know I'm here when you need to talk

jeremydraul
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State of Despair
3 posted 2001-02-13 01:45 PM


Wow... what a teary-eyed poem. I wish i can find someone like that, all i get are sarcastic girls who dont care... but thats my own little problem. I hope that everything comes true for you, keep rollin'.

Jeremy


"Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark." - Jeremy Raulinaitis---'Fading Me Away'

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4 posted 2001-02-13 02:44 PM


Very nice poem here.......Good luck with love and I hope you stay together for a long time



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies
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5 posted 2001-02-15 08:20 PM


I can't believe they're missing this. This is a very powerful poem. This is a perfect example of pouring your heart out

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Tears of Glass
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6 posted 2001-02-16 10:16 AM


A little late, but I love this poem! It's great! It's so full of emotion, and I felt it all. Wondefully done. *Click* Into my library.. great job.

*Jennifer

"My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see."

Lakewalker
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7 posted 2001-02-17 12:07 PM


Way to let your emotions out, you did a really good job on this one

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Elvenblood
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8 posted 2001-02-17 09:04 PM


I love this poem! I've had a few distance relationships, and they can be very strong. I wisht eh best to the two of you.

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

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