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Andrea4writes
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since 2000-12-03
Posts 31
Fayetteville, NC USA

0 posted 2001-02-12 03:43 PM


are you the one,
how do i know?
when will i have the stregnth
to let my feelings overflow?

i don’t want to deny
this feeling that fills up my soul.
but i don’t want to loose you
and everything that i know.

you are a part of me now,
steadfast and true.
there is no more denying,
that i love you.

but how do i tell you?
will you run away?
or will you jump for joy,
and thank God for this day.

i guess i will never know
until the words come true.
but i do know this
in my heart for sure,
that i truly do love you.


<3Andrea ~luvs~ Anthony,<3

You only live once so live it to the fullest..
Love comes and goes but friends stay for ever~!~!~!~!~!


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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
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1 posted 2001-02-12 06:17 PM


tell him or else you'll never know
don't just blurt it out though
timing is essential
good luck and let us know what happens  

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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Member Patricius
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2001-02-12 08:00 PM


Very nicely done and I'm going to have to agree with acire on this one.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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